rate_review Reviews

I'm really enjoying reading through your stuff. Yet again you've written a great story. You managed to make a sweet story between two very stoic pilots. You managed to have them communicate without being overly wordy. It's really amazing how you can pull of their characters so well while twisting them into such sexy positions. Brilliant.

man im only on chapter 9 so i hope that this fic is either finished or ongoing because if I get to the end and that's all there is Ill be heartbroken! Its so hard to find such an awesome 1x3x1 fic!! Thanks for writing this!!

I can only say thank you! You helped me a lot with this story to try to understand the thoughts and emotions of Trowa. This helped me to try and feel what the charackters are feeling and I am sure it will help with my own story. Hope you don't mind if I take your story as inspiration and a litle help?! Again thx and good luck and have much fun while writing!!!

I just read this and I saw that you thought that that lemon was to long....I just wanted to let you know that it was perfect...trust me whwn I say that I have read enough -oh my god is this done yet- lemons to know this

Just thought I'd leave a quick review to say what a great story this was. I only stumbled across it recently along with your other work and I think the portrayal of Heero and Trowa is really good and very believable. I look forward to reading your other works! Till next time.

chapter 9: i ate up the drivel like it was the most delicious seafood in Hakodate. months between reviews, but this chapter managed to pull me back in right away without losing anything. thought it was a very good idea to focus so much on the slight, physical side of Heero and Trowa's confrontation. best part was Duo, shooting from the hip and aiming for the head without being too tactless. loved the conversation. cool that you brought up Duo and Trowa's chess match from the series. good stuff

chapter 10: the emotions are a bit strong, on Heero's part notably so. thought you did great justice having Trowa sneak off and then empty himself, only to have Heero re-plant the seeds of doubt and, just maybe, desire. the dialogue is the gem in this chapter. sad to think i'm nearing the end of this. i've enjoyed it quite a lot.

You've done very, very well with this. If you're willing, I'd like to see...well, read...where you'd take the storyline from, say, about the time Duo was getting over being pissed about that vid being shared with Chang, perhaps revolving around the circus doing one of its, as you said, rare trips. I can think of some very interesting things (nothing absolutely concrete as of yet, but my mind bats ideas around like a cat with yarn, until it all just unravels the mystery and falls into place before me). So, in the hopes that you may be willing to do so, you can contact me at winds_of_nocte@yahoo.com or wolf.kin.flight@gmail.com to discuss this. *crosses fingers, looks for falling stars* (lol)

chapter 6: been a while. some of the conversation was a little too... dense/insightful for my liking. thought it was good you brought Duo and Wufei into it, even if they might not make it to the main action after this. i absolutely love the scenes where Trowa is messing with Heero or delivers a sharp comment. those are my favorites. again, a good read.

chapter 7: good action. shame on Trowa though! sloppy, sloppy sloppy... liked the bit toward the end with Heero tending to his wounds. wouldn't have minded if this chapter had been twice as long as it was. still, a good read.