rate_review Reviews

chapter 8: was really pleased with this chapter. i was a little worried about how things would unfold after the threat was eliminated, but you're handling it well. i absolutely agree with your note about "confession != get together" with these two. Duo and Wufei were a nice addition. It's good to have Duo break up the calm, considering coolness. I also liked Trowa's disdain for Heero's actions. His pride is really showing up in this piece, and the careful spotlight you put on it separates the whole thing from the standard 'tough boys fall in love' type of story. well done

chapter 5: well, now we're in the woods we came to picnic at, and we're in deep. it's all romance this chapter (though, fittingly funny, the word 'romance' doesn't seem right here) and i can say that i liked it a lot. you didn't just throw off the mantle of 'the mission' and then piss into the wind. trowa's demand for control, the calm, considering conversation, and the incredible grounding in 'a soldier's life' keeps this in the badass zone while moving it to yaoi-town. i particularly enjoyed the description of Trowa pinning Heero to the wall.

chapter 3: the best chapter yet. not just because of the kiss. you are walking a tightrpe with this thing. the yaoi that we all want is there, but you're playing it straight like a gen fic would. Trowa's reactions and impossibly calm reasoning are shining points that make the shadow of the ever-growing sexual overtones all the more sharper. You keep the characters, as the title implies, balancing fully on a sharp edge. Making it explicit this chapter was perhaps the first time you've really gone out to shove your business in the readers face. Everything else is done masterfully, and the whole thing just stinks to high heaven of gloriously impending upheaval, chaos in a bullet. I think I'll read chapter 4 tonight.

chapter 4: well, hey. there's a LOT more yaoi here in this chapter. and, when you focus more on the emotions and less on the mission, it does serve to render Trowa a bit of a worrywart. Still, I absolutely enjoyed it. The conversation at the end kept the two of them in character and had them confront the issue. Thought Heero was a little sulky, but very good in how he pressed Trowa. The revelation of his reason for keeping Trowa away from the conflict was border-line awesome plot work. Again, a great chapter.

chapter 2: now we get some tensheeown! still, this thing is a walking love sack for me. the two are so professional that the badassery almost hurts me through the computer screen. also incredibly insightful as to some of their similarities and why they share the bond, or whatever it is, that they do. particularly liked 'they were fighters, not soldiers' line and 'BoxI'. this thing is an absolute darling to read, and i save it for the end of each night because i am looking forward to it the most and know it won't disappoint.

chapter 1: i'm absolutely down with this. serious, calmly presented, no frills. this is the kind of 'in theme' story that i really scower the fandom for. it's a bit heavy on technical goings-on, something i have trouble following at times, but that's easily forgivable considering you have Trowa focus so seriously and thoroughly on so many aspects of life filled with trusting no one. i really am looking forward to reading through this. kudos to you.

I
MISSED
YOU
SO
MUCH.

;_;
Like. It was like. Like I'm Duo (duh, what other pilot would I be = =), and you're Heero, and you do all these awesome things, and I'm totally wrapped up in you, and I'm like "Waaaaaaahhh *starry eyes*" and then you disappear, and then I'm all moody and snappy with everybody, blowing up shit and pulling pranks on people cuz I'm having Heero-withdrawls, and and and then you appear out of nowhere and completely turn my mood around and then I get all sappy but I don't wanna be sappy cuz you're Heero Yuy, whaddya care about MY feelings?, but then I just let it out.... aiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~

LOL. Yeah anyway, moving on...

I follow along Merc, Pressure of a Blade, and also read your one-shot, and I just love them all. As an author I look up to you and your writing style, your perfection and how well thought out your stories are. It just seriously wows me, and I'm left feeling a bit like Trowa, wanting to challenge myself harder than I've ever been challenged, so that maybe one day I can say I'm worthy of having you as an idol.
LOL I promise I'm not a fangirl XD Well a little bit of one. But still @_@;;;;

Anyway. I've expressed my undying love for you enough, I think, you're probably rolling your eyes and snickering to yourself, going "Wth, this Camui chick is a bit... weird..." so I think I'll end this review before I embarrass myself more.

Much love and good tidings~
♥

I thought you did really well with this story. It's not everyday that you come apon a well written 1x3. You might not have thought they were IC but for the most part they were. Only gripe I have with the story as a whole is when you start to get really descriptive. I like understanding how things work and I love getting to the bottom of a characters thought process as much as the next person. But when I can skip like a paragraph or two of text and still stay on track (a good thing really) that means, I wasn't really interested with it in the first place. *Shrugs* Meh that's just me ^_^. Hope this wasn't too long of a review. Till next time.

That was soooo hot! I bow to your lemon writing skills!!! I'm the type to get bored with a lemon that has a super long prep and you hit it just right, I mean there is only so much ass stretching one can read before they get sleepy. I'm glad I read this fic, I didn't at first because I generally like for a multichap to have a few chaps posted before I start reading it, but this is awesome.

Vashta

Grawr, you finally updated ~_~ I thought the lemon was fine, there was nothing wrong with it. But then again the author is never pleased with their own work, cuz you know, we gotta write it and all. xD The reader reads it and is like "WOAH NEAT" while we're on the other side of the screen bashing our hands/heads against the keyboard going "I FUCKING HATE YOU ALL LDSFKJDSLFKJDFKLJDSKF" whilst starting to hate ourselves for starting the project of the story with an awesome idea in mind, going along with everything happening neatly and then getting to that one hump that makes you want to jump off of a cliff.

*deep breath*

Lol take your time deary, there's no need to rush genius. :D