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OK... so where's the rest?! *big puppy eyes.* More please?!

I really really like this fic :D
It's so cute to imagine them moving in together xD
I'm looking forward to have Al in the story!
Thank you so much, and update soon!

Ah the joy of moving into a new home. What a pain that is! XD It always seems to take forever to get everything just so before a house feels like a home. That was not cool how Riza tricked them into looking at a house right across the street from Gracia. If it had been a house in the same general area it would have been fine. Directly across the street?? uh-uh. That's a little (i.e. a lot) too close for comfort. :P Should be interesting when everybody else figures out Roy and Ed are together not to mention what the two of them will have to go thru to get themselves reinstated. :) More fic soon please!

It's really sweet that Roy is going to respond to each of Ed's letters. They'll learn a lot about what each other was going thru and they'll have a chance to really bond as they learn. It could even be part of that courting thing Roy wants to do! :) The almost-sex scene was really good and, I guess, almost necessary. They both needed something to take the edge off their hunger for one another so they could focus on the tasks ahead. Thank goodness Roy has the presence of mind to want to build their relationship slowly and carefully on a solid emotional foundation and not just a physical one otherwise this relationship could go down in flames before it even gets started. All the mystery around what the others have in mind for Roy is kinda fun! I'm not entirely sure what they're up to but it sounds big! :)

Oh how I do love the scene of them kissing on the train! Trains for some reason do seem to have a romantic air about them don't they. I can't wait to see Ed's letters and find out what else is going on with Ed that has him so determined to make Roy return to Central!!

Sorry to hear about your writing partner. I hope she gets in contact with you soon. Those two stories had/have so much potential that I'd hate to see them left to die but I understand. Ya gotta do what ya gotta do. :(

I love this! The way it started off reminded me of my favorite doujinshi, Dolce! Roy, all alone in his cabin, is suddenly visited by Ed. God I love that doujin even if it ended sadly. This fic, or rather this chapter, has a much happier ending and I'm definitely looking forward to more!! :)

Hey! Sorry, I forgot to mention this a minute ago. I checked your pen name because I KNEW it sounded familiar. You're the author of Pyrometallon and Where He Belongs! I loved those stories and hope you can find the time to finish them AND continue with your new fic here! :)