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January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, it was pretty good and with a nice bit of humour.
I didn't like the bit with Vegeta saying 'Goku' at first because him calling Goku Kakarott is a way to honour the man as a saiyan despite all the insults Vegeta throws at Goku,but when I found out the reason why he said it I didn't mind and thought it funny. Poor Geta.
I would like to see a sequel with a pregnant vegeta as I am a huge mpreg Vegeta fan *grins*
I didn't like the bit with Vegeta saying 'Goku' at first because him calling Goku Kakarott is a way to honour the man as a saiyan despite all the insults Vegeta throws at Goku,but when I found out the reason why he said it I didn't mind and thought it funny. Poor Geta.
I would like to see a sequel with a pregnant vegeta as I am a huge mpreg Vegeta fan *grins*
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January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HahahaIII This is a brilliant story ! I totally love it.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Saiyan Scrimage? Strange name, reminds me of Rugby!
Well that was explosive, I forgot they might have all heard them :) Still, they seem to be mostly accepting of it, apart from Chichi. I thought Goku would be the one in denial and all angsty but it seems Vegeta is. That damn pride of his :)
Oh, oh, my vote is for Vegeta getting preggers :)
Well that was explosive, I forgot they might have all heard them :) Still, they seem to be mostly accepting of it, apart from Chichi. I thought Goku would be the one in denial and all angsty but it seems Vegeta is. That damn pride of his :)
Oh, oh, my vote is for Vegeta getting preggers :)
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Much better spacing of the paragraphs now :)
Made me giggle how Vegeta was calling him Goku in the throws of passion. Goku was that good. Bet Vegeta can't resist him now despite fighting with himself over it, though Goku will probably be very angsty tomorrow.
Hope you meant this was the ending of the chapter and not the story as you can't leave it here! (wails) :(
Made me giggle how Vegeta was calling him Goku in the throws of passion. Goku was that good. Bet Vegeta can't resist him now despite fighting with himself over it, though Goku will probably be very angsty tomorrow.
Hope you meant this was the ending of the chapter and not the story as you can't leave it here! (wails) :(
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December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heheh talk about a dream come true. XD This amuses me. Keep up the good work. ^^
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is indeed a catastrophe, not a christmas one though, but a commata catastrophe. Please get a beta.
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December 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should space the paragraphs out as it is a little difficult to read.
Vegeta seems very accepting but maybe he thinks he's dreaming. What will happen when Goku wakes up?
Vegeta seems very accepting but maybe he thinks he's dreaming. What will happen when Goku wakes up?