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Whoops. . . took a long time for me to get around to reviewing. I'm sorry!!! I have to say about this chapter is that I love how Trunks is growing up and finding that he doesn't need to have his hand held by Goten and Gohan all the time. At first you really had me wanting to slap Gohan and I was waiting and waiting to see what you had up your slieve!! The antisapation is growing!!!! OMG I can't wait for the next installment. I do have to point out that I am just a tiny bit bumbed out that you didn't write us the conversation between Gohan and Vegeta. Only a bit bumbed cause you had me right back on the ball with that cliff hanger and that intense scene in the elevator!! Gohan is such a bad lier!!!! Keep up the damn good work!!!!!!!

I really really really want Gohan and Trunks to be back together. However as the story states, its going to be a while before they get back together. Still loving the story sweets, keep at it!

Wow, I just want to say that I feel sooo sorry for Gohan. He's just like his dad in that he'd do anything for everyone else, even throw away his own happiness! *sheds a tear* I'd really like to see a scene between Gohan and Goku, because it just seems like Gohan would go comfort him too after all is said and done. And Goku feels to me like the only one who could relate to Gohan in the self-sacrificing way in your story. XD Woooh, and Trunks! You could just see him developing throughout the story and I feel proud of him! He's grown so much in this story that it makes me all giddy thinking of it! He and Gohan are cute together, and I just love how you characterize Gohan the most though. *is totally a Gohan fan XD* Sorry I haven't reviewed before (I've been following this for awhile now XD) but I'm kind of lazy XD. Thank you thank you thank you for the story! Truhan=Cute beyond reason. But poor Goten, got all messed up, then the cute brotherly moment...Awwwww... XD ~Lunamaru

I DIDN'T FORGET YOU I PROMISE.
PROMISSSSEEEEE.
*clings to, cuddles, strokes possessively*
My... prrrrecious...
.......
*cough*

So uh. yay! More development. Still waiting for that sex. Or maybe you already gave it to me and I don't remember? I have a horrible memory, yes I do, too much whiskey methinks.

D'awww. Gohan.
You know, the way you portray his and Trunks' relationship is exactly how I am with my gf.
WEEIRDDD.
(and I'm not sure if it's a good or bad thing...?)

Lol. Uhh so yeah. Waiting? Yes. Always. Mhm.
Always waiting.
Always ready.
*speaks enigmatically, takes a sip of whiskey*

So far, my favorite character in this story is Vegeta. Gohan is refusing to admit that he is being an idiot. Goten needs to start owning up to his sayajin heritage or his issues are just going to skyrocket, damn it. And Trunks seriosuly needs to have a visit with Mirai Trunks. In fact, I just wish that you would send him to the future to spend some long and nice quality time with Mirai Trunks...in a kind of "find yourself" way. Then, Gohan needs to follow them, and have loads of crazy monkey sex with Mirai Trunks...er, sorry. That last bit was to my own personal flavor.

My name should now be changed to "The Angrier Buddha". Gohan's so-called selfless act right there? Irritating to the 10th! Gah!

I love the intense interaction between Gohan and Trunks. Clearly there are some unresolved matters between the two. I think Gohan's decision to distance himself from Trunks is somewhat of an act of cowardice. He tries to give the impression that it is for Goten's sake, but I believe that his true motivation is fear. Gohan needs to man up and acknowledge his feelings once and for all. He also owes Trunks some boinking for his pigheadedness :p. Trunks is trying to meet him halfway; it would behoove him to do the same, dammit!

Once again, good chapter and I eagerly await the next :).

You are such a liar. You can live without your ankles and that's all I ever threatened.

You know what you can't live without? A heart (though that's debatable as you seem to have managed). You ripped mine out with the line "There is no us". But you know that. You relish it. You're a cruel monster. And I just can't get enough. What is going to happen in that lab??? I've gotta know.

Trunks and Gohan *are* going to make up, right? RIGHT?? Argh. Cliffhangers! Hate!

This schizophrenic review brought to you by I Sold My Soul To The Devil Anonymous. ISMSTTDA: We're here.

You've built up great suspence with saying Gohan has a plan, but not revealing it. :P

Now I guess I'll have to wait to see what that plan is. *grumps*

Great chapter by the way!

i really really hope gohan and trunks get together in the end. i'll be heartbroken if it ends up as goten and trunks. gohan and trunks just work together sooo well. they compliment each other perfectly.

you are one of the best authors i have seen. :) really. i feel like i understand your characters and the thoughts that go into their actions. this is one of the best stories i have read also. i check this website everyday in hopes that you have updated again. my heart soared when i saw that there was a new chapter.

just wanted you to know that you're excellent, and this story is excellent.

Yay! Kim's back :D I really hope she appears more in this story because she's so cool.
I thought her reaction to Trunks being a saiyan was really nonchalant though lol.
Gosh I really do think Trunks needs to get away from the drama even more now that Gohan doesn't want him back :(
I was thinking of an island to! Ibiza to be exact :D and he should take Kim so they can have heaps of Island fun together haha :P