rate_review Reviews

Well here I thought that good DBZ yaoi was all be dead!!!! OMG I got a hankering to find a good story a while back and LET ME TELL YOU! I must have reread this one about five times!!! Yea. . . don't ask where I was either at the DBZ yaoi glory days LOL! You have me hook, line, and sinker!!! Dear Kami in the clouds PLEASE get more up soon!!!

Ahem. . . forgive my ramblings. YOU ROCK!

Just leaving another review to let you know that this line:

“If you must know, Gohan,” he admitted quietly, “the only time I feel truly alive is when I’m doubled over at his feet, gasping for air and choking on my own blood.” Trunks closed his eyes and leaned his head back. “Father. He knows how to make it hurt so good.”

is the best thing I have ever read in my life.

That is all.

I've already left you a review at the BoxerxRice site, but it wouldn't hurt to leave you another one on this site. I am seriously hooked on this story. I love the fact that the relationship between Gohan and Trunks is forming at a realistic pace (none of that "love at first sight" nonsense......though, I do enjoy such stories occasionally *grins*). Goten squandered his chance, as far as I'm concerned. Time for Trunks to move on :).

I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Oh wow! This is getting intense(as in love intensity XD)! I was happy that Gohan is finding more about himself
and the same goes for Trunks. But I do hope Goten and Trunks make amends..Oooh what if Goten finds out about Gohan and Trunks's kiss? Hurmmm. Story is amazing! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

I just feel so, so sad for Goten. He's so confused and pathetic. Somebody needs to sit that boy down and explain life to him! He's not smart, guys! He needs this stuff spelled out for him!

OMG...!! I love Trunks!!! I laughed my ass off when he was whispering to that pansy ass sharper...and when he ran out...geez what a dork!
Videl is a bitch! And that's all I have to say about that...

NOW....

THAT KISS WAS SMOKIN'!!!! ABOUT TIME!!!! WAHOO!!! I swear to the FanFic Beings out there....I think they make a hot ass pairing here...much..MUCH better then Goten...

Oh yea, Goten is a cofused ass...I mean how can you NOT know which hole to stick it in???!!! WOW..but they never said he was a genius after all he IS Goku's son....oh that's mean...oh well..never said I was nice :oP

P.S...Oh yea Gohan is hot!!!!

XD

Post soon!!!

JESUS CHRIST GOHAN WHERE DID YOU GET ALL OF THOSE BRAINS IN THEM THAR HEAD.
I SWEAR IT WAS A GENETIC DEFECT.
DE. FECT.
URRRRRGGGGH.
(capslock denotes extreme emotion)
I've been reading your story for a while but now that Trunks is actually getting somewhere I decided to review. xD;; I'm so bad. ee;;

Anyway I'm excited to watch Gohan slowly start to fall for our charming and slightly benevolent Prince~
but alas what will happen to Goten? will it be too late when he finally realizes that he made the wrong decision? will he feel betrayed by his brother? will he finally submit to Vegeta and become a royal concubine? all on the next episode of DRAGON BALLLL ZEEEEEEEEEE.

♥

*grins* oh mah gawd, u are AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! *glomps* Like, seriously! Seriously seriously!!! ^^ I hope there's more to come *cough*cum*cough* because I'm on the edge! *grins* Of my seat, of course.
Love the fic ^^

Your story is fan effin' tastic!
I love how you've detailed the characters so close to the manga/anime versions.
Great job ;)

:P Is it bad of me to be happy Vegeta found Trunks while they were jogging? It led to so many funny moments later on in this chapter!

And it led to UST...mind boggling - just get it done already - UST. :P

Lovely update! Looking forward to the next one of course!