rate_review Reviews

Kinky :)

Think Goku turned it up too soon though, he should have done it gradually to prolong it more. Then again maybe it turned him on so much that he couldn't wait.

*Grins* You know how much I love you for this. For a PWP –and a /very/ sexy one at that- I thought it was effortlessness erotically naturalistic. It flowed perfectly and was very feeling with great description. The glasses and Vegeta’s impatience to get out of their outfits plus the ‘eh?!’ ending kept it in-character and lighthearted. The “squirmed awkwardly in his seat ”, “securing it inside him”, “long wire running out” and “warm hand on his cheek encouraging ” were my absolute favorites. You made it everything I wanted and more. Thank you T.C.C.S.H!