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Bizzare, but funny. Thanks for shareing.

Over these last few months, I - along with Goku and Vegeta - have learned many things about the anime and the fandom and it has been a fun journey :-D I think this story is just what the fandom needed - some light, self-aware humor - and a nice break from the angsty, gloom and doom world of dbz fanfic! I'm not lying when I say that it was a joy and a pleasure to beta and I'm glad to welcome you back "home" :)

Finally! I have been checking this stories every day. The last scene is funny. I am glad they finally did it. The realisation is a bit sudden though. All in all a good crack up! Love your story tremendously. Hope you continue.

Sadly my pc died again so I'm reviewing from the PS3, not ideal but it's the only alterrnative I've got. Don't think I've ever read a funnier lead up to sex. You had me in stitches with all the cliches and they were so true :) I loved the role play. Goku wasn't very good at it was he, no wonder Vegeta couldn't wait in the end, and I didn't mind you not following it through. Leaves more for my imagination :) Thanks for a really funny read and I hope you write more soon.

So sorry for not reviewing sooner, my pc died and needed repairs :(

That part with the lube where Vegeta told Goku to undress made me laugh out loud :) Would he really have gone through with it? What would Goku have thought? That it was some special technique to defeat the skeletons? Mind-boggles!

I loved the Danny part, Goku's slip of the tongue saying 'we' :) Shame Timmy wasn't interested.

Ewww, Goku shaved his tail. Don't think I'll get that image out of my mind for a while :(

Seriously, Chichi and Picollo?! *shudders* Poor Picollo :(

Awww, I was hoping for a bit of frisky action when they were drunk :( Maybe next time :)

Another great interaction between the two. you sure is a good teaser. I look forward to the grand realisation soon.

oh holy shit!!

i think i have joined the "lost the mind club" LOL

any ways......oh boy they are just dumber as rocks!!

laters! ~_^

miko

My favorite lines from this chapter:

[�Doesn�t it just make you feel as if you were stuck in an RPG game? All these items we don�t know exactly how to use��

Goku gave Vegeta a scrutinizing look. �If I had my way, I�d never let you play video games again!�]

Hehehehehe...Vegeta's video game obsession kills me!

[The skeleton looked as if Goku had insulted his intelligence. �Of course, I have tried to fight for tolerance of the gay community and widen their vision! I even arranged a gay pride parade! Well, true, I was the only one taking part in it, but��

�That must be it.�

Both Goku and Danny looked at Vegeta.

�The pride parade,� Vegeta explained. �Well, you don�t see us,� he coughed slightly, �heterosexuals, half-naked, parading with posters, saying that we are heterosexuals.�]

First of all, the idea of Danny having a 1-man gay pride parade makes me smile. Then having flaming Vegeta and clueless Goku talking about it like this... Brilliant, just brilliant :-P


[�We can�t let this injustice continue!� Goku declared suddenly.

Vegeta�s eyes popped out. Unbelievable. �Is this some genetic failure? Is Saiyaman back?� he inquired.]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. It certainly sounds that way. The whole scene where Goku was trying to help Danny made me think Goku should get his own Jerry Springer-esque talk show :-P

Ahahahaha�I Another brilliant chapter. Goku here is priceless. Poor Vegeta must be so frustrated. Danny must have reminded him in many ways. The only difference between timmy and Goku is the later is so clueless, or not? I wait for your disclosure. I love the story very much. please update soon.

ok......you lost your mind.

and no smut?? you just love to tease EVERYBODY!



laters! ~_^

miko