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March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that's so Vegeta to get Goku to get the curse (tho partly THEM too) :) Very funny how it benefited him with the wonderful sight of water cascading over Goku, no wonder he walked behind!
Loved the Naruto quips and Vegeta rant about Sasuke, pot calling kettle black :) Then his rant against the curse, it didn't stand a chance. Left me with a image of a huge Vegeta curse squashing the small cloud.
What a sneaky gift Piccolo sent them. Lol, how are they going to defeat the skeletons with that?
Aww don't be so down on the movie, at least it's got everyone talking about Dragonball again, and there's Dragonball Kai now too :)
Loved the Naruto quips and Vegeta rant about Sasuke, pot calling kettle black :) Then his rant against the curse, it didn't stand a chance. Left me with a image of a huge Vegeta curse squashing the small cloud.
What a sneaky gift Piccolo sent them. Lol, how are they going to defeat the skeletons with that?
Aww don't be so down on the movie, at least it's got everyone talking about Dragonball again, and there's Dragonball Kai now too :)
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha.I love Vegeta's monologue about the curse. Very good summery of his life. Haha. I also love you interpretation of current anemation world. I am, too, far behind the recent trend but I am not sorry.
Yes. I am cynthia. *blushing* Thank you. I look forward to see your next chapter.
Yes. I am cynthia. *blushing* Thank you. I look forward to see your next chapter.
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March 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
u r....brillant!! leaving everyone hangin by a thread for the lemon!!
muhahah.....~_^
good work!
laters! ~_^
miko
muhahah.....~_^
good work!
laters! ~_^
miko
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha. Goku chase burger and bowl of rice, Vegeta's wet dream cross. Totally love it. You are a genious. Pity Baba's strategy did not work. I look forward to see what happens next.
Keep updating!
Keep updating!
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February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok chayron.......waiting for that other chapter since i WANT to know what is going on in that head of yours!
laters! ~_^
miko
laters! ~_^
miko
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow Vegeta's had a lot of threesomes, at least in his dreams, no wonder Goku 1 panicked and ran :)
Loved the whole Authors thing, very funny, and true. But I think Vegeta's on to you now :)
Loved the whole Authors thing, very funny, and true. But I think Vegeta's on to you now :)
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I *love* this chapter. I know I already told you all of this, but I think it bears repeating. I laughed and laughed while reading it. First of all, Goku No. 2...he is such a character. The Goku of Vegeta's dreams, who lives only to please him, haha. I enjoy when he comes around. He's so damned naughty ;-)
Also, Vegeta and the threesomes...that was hilarious. He has quite the imagination.... Or *THEY* do.... :)
Too many funny lines in here for me to copy/paste them all, but here were some of my favorites:
“Well, having your planet blown up, then having a difficult childhood with Frieza constantly raping you can do that to a person,” Vegeta agreed.
Goku’s brows crossed. “What are you talking about?"
“I’m not sure. But this is what…” Vegeta looked around carefully, “…what THEY say,” he leaned to whisper into Goku’s ear.
“They?”
“No. THEY.”
“Oh, THEY!” he muttered after a minute. He wondered if he was thinking about the right THEM. “Well that must be very hard on you. But how the hell did they arrive at this conclusion?”
Vegeta shrugged. “It’s all about drama. And sex,” he added. “Especially sex.”
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Vegeta knows us so well!
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"Vegeta, with the same blood-chilling facial expression, smiled wider. “Goddamit, Kakarott!” he burst out suddenly. “Do you really think that I’m some weepy emo?!”
“What’s an ‘emo’?"
“Doesn’t matter! What matters is that I would never do those things if THEY didn’t make me do them!”
“‘THEY’?” Goku repeated, his forehead furrowing while trying to make sense of what the prince was saying. “Are we talking about the same “THEY”?”
Vegeta looked around carefully. He leaned in to Goku. “Yes,” he whispered into Goku’s ear, “’THEY’, the authors.”
Goku startled. “Shhhhh!” he hissed. Paling visibly, he looked around with panic stricken eyes. He could still remember the last time he had been turned into a woman with a macho complex. There were also times when he could swear that some of “THEM” were trying to make him look like an absolute idiot.
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I believe I'm often guilty of this myself ;-) Sorry, Goku.... And Vegeta using the word emo...love it :)
Anyway, a great chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
Also, Vegeta and the threesomes...that was hilarious. He has quite the imagination.... Or *THEY* do.... :)
Too many funny lines in here for me to copy/paste them all, but here were some of my favorites:
“Well, having your planet blown up, then having a difficult childhood with Frieza constantly raping you can do that to a person,” Vegeta agreed.
Goku’s brows crossed. “What are you talking about?"
“I’m not sure. But this is what…” Vegeta looked around carefully, “…what THEY say,” he leaned to whisper into Goku’s ear.
“They?”
“No. THEY.”
“Oh, THEY!” he muttered after a minute. He wondered if he was thinking about the right THEM. “Well that must be very hard on you. But how the hell did they arrive at this conclusion?”
Vegeta shrugged. “It’s all about drama. And sex,” he added. “Especially sex.”
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Vegeta knows us so well!
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"Vegeta, with the same blood-chilling facial expression, smiled wider. “Goddamit, Kakarott!” he burst out suddenly. “Do you really think that I’m some weepy emo?!”
“What’s an ‘emo’?"
“Doesn’t matter! What matters is that I would never do those things if THEY didn’t make me do them!”
“‘THEY’?” Goku repeated, his forehead furrowing while trying to make sense of what the prince was saying. “Are we talking about the same “THEY”?”
Vegeta looked around carefully. He leaned in to Goku. “Yes,” he whispered into Goku’s ear, “’THEY’, the authors.”
Goku startled. “Shhhhh!” he hissed. Paling visibly, he looked around with panic stricken eyes. He could still remember the last time he had been turned into a woman with a macho complex. There were also times when he could swear that some of “THEM” were trying to make him look like an absolute idiot.
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I believe I'm often guilty of this myself ;-) Sorry, Goku.... And Vegeta using the word emo...love it :)
Anyway, a great chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
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February 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are the chakras that Goku is trying to master going to be like those in Naruto?
Giggled at Vegeta imagining Goku flying in front of him in a thong. Yummy! But laughed out loud at Vegeta getting the louse and going overboard, plus Goku's reaction :)
Oh poor Goku's got crabs now by mistake (hope that won't stop any future intimacy with Vegeta!). They are both in the wars now but it makes for very humorous reading :)
Giggled at Vegeta imagining Goku flying in front of him in a thong. Yummy! But laughed out loud at Vegeta getting the louse and going overboard, plus Goku's reaction :)
Oh poor Goku's got crabs now by mistake (hope that won't stop any future intimacy with Vegeta!). They are both in the wars now but it makes for very humorous reading :)
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter a lot :) For those who have been wanting a lemon, there's some hot, naked, wet Goku action here. And regular Goku as well...hungry and, of course, completely oblivious. Ah well, poor Goku No. 2, having to entertain Vegeta in his dreams every night.
So nice of Yamcha to try to get them together... Even though he's only doing it to get back in Bulma's pants :-P
So nice of Yamcha to try to get them together... Even though he's only doing it to get back in Bulma's pants :-P
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy. I loved the bit about classes on Vegeta-sei. *eyes you* You're not by any chance german, are you? Because that joke would have worked even better in german. The german words for tail and cock are identical. Yeah, I'm not a native speaker either, as you might have guessed by now.
As for co-writing - take your time. I'm pretty busy at the moment anyways. But if you ever feel like trying, let me know. It's been a while since I co-wrote a story (and lets not talk about that one, shall we), but I'd be curious to try once more.
As for co-writing - take your time. I'm pretty busy at the moment anyways. But if you ever feel like trying, let me know. It's been a while since I co-wrote a story (and lets not talk about that one, shall we), but I'd be curious to try once more.