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January 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I could just see Vegeta doing that to his house to get rid of the cockroaches, and it made it worse that he followed Goku's advice at first, not something he makes a habit of doing so he must have been really kicking himself.
OMG you had me fooled along with Vegeta when Goku was talking about tail lengths, I had to go back and re-read it! Saucy :)
That's just the kind of food related dream I can imagine Goku having, the hamburger didn't stand a chance! Vegeta's was pretty raunchy, shame he didn't catch Goku 1 before they woke up. Oh well, maybe next time :)
Surprised that Yamcha was the one trying to get them together but kinda gagged a bit when Baba came onto him!
OMG you had me fooled along with Vegeta when Goku was talking about tail lengths, I had to go back and re-read it! Saucy :)
That's just the kind of food related dream I can imagine Goku having, the hamburger didn't stand a chance! Vegeta's was pretty raunchy, shame he didn't catch Goku 1 before they woke up. Oh well, maybe next time :)
Surprised that Yamcha was the one trying to get them together but kinda gagged a bit when Baba came onto him!
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No problem. I just thought I'd ask. Story is great so far. :o)
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January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 has been my absolute favorite so far! So many memorable moments here. First, the massage. Our poor, clueless Goku, innocently enjoying it like that. Doesn't he know he's stuck in an M/M story? A massage is never just a massage...
Also, the mental image of the Ice-jin zapping our heroes with sneezing fits was highly entertaining. I liked how, after all Vegeta has been through in all 9 seasons of DBZ, it's a cold that finally takes him down and makes him want to give up. Men are so useless when sick :-P And Goku did a wonderful job of reminding him of what Summer Kold's family had done to the Saiyans and appealing to Vegeta's pride to motivate him. It was a very Goku moment.
Of course, Vegeta's explanation of how to properly choreograph a fight is right on target and completely hilarious. I read it to my husband and even he was laughing out loud and shaking his head in agreement. You got in a lot of good digs here at all sorts of things: breast implants, long-winded villains, and even capitalistic society. A great chapter from my new favorite Saiyan satirist!
Also, the mental image of the Ice-jin zapping our heroes with sneezing fits was highly entertaining. I liked how, after all Vegeta has been through in all 9 seasons of DBZ, it's a cold that finally takes him down and makes him want to give up. Men are so useless when sick :-P And Goku did a wonderful job of reminding him of what Summer Kold's family had done to the Saiyans and appealing to Vegeta's pride to motivate him. It was a very Goku moment.
Of course, Vegeta's explanation of how to properly choreograph a fight is right on target and completely hilarious. I read it to my husband and even he was laughing out loud and shaking his head in agreement. You got in a lot of good digs here at all sorts of things: breast implants, long-winded villains, and even capitalistic society. A great chapter from my new favorite Saiyan satirist!
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha! Vegeta is hilarious when he got cold. Wonder whether summer kold would be dead of galic gloves in five years time.
BTW, I can totally see the chemistry.Why everybody said this style could not tolerate lemon? I can totally see a lemon coming. Or it is just me? *blink, blink*
BTW, I can totally see the chemistry.Why everybody said this style could not tolerate lemon? I can totally see a lemon coming. Or it is just me? *blink, blink*
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*snickers8 this chapter made me laugh in so many different places XD awesum.
Also, you forgot that the hero's trusty, but weak, friends had to get beat up first, then the hero shows up at the last moment... or is that another scenario? Oh, right, that's the other scenario. Avenging Hero XD
Also, you forgot that the hero's trusty, but weak, friends had to get beat up first, then the hero shows up at the last moment... or is that another scenario? Oh, right, that's the other scenario. Avenging Hero XD
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bursts out laughing* I especially liked the part about the lemon. Though it still saddens me, it also made me smile. If you ever want to co-write a story.. eh. *remembers she still has a humorous story waiting to be betaed* Nevermind.
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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping that massage was going to lead somewhere, think Vegeta was too, typical Goku to ruin the moment with his uncontrollable tail! I also think Vegeta has a pretty good idea why they grew back.
Really loved Summer Kold, great description of her and a funny new character. Shame we have to wait five years for a rematch.
Laughed out loud when Vegeta caught ill, I could just picture him whining like that, and PMSL at Vegeta explaining how to fight properly according to the series, so very true. Loved the bit about removing the gi at the end as well, Vegeta was very keen about that part wasn't he :)
Really loved Summer Kold, great description of her and a funny new character. Shame we have to wait five years for a rematch.
Laughed out loud when Vegeta caught ill, I could just picture him whining like that, and PMSL at Vegeta explaining how to fight properly according to the series, so very true. Loved the bit about removing the gi at the end as well, Vegeta was very keen about that part wasn't he :)
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay! Yeah I completely loved that episode, with the worms and such,
seems to good that Vegeta would be freaked about worms! XD
and always just seems too funny that gokuu would be able to convice Vegeta to do anything!
lol!
No not WAY OOC, I tend to exaggerate! ~Pouts~ I'm good! I swearz!
And I am sorry, I really did mean anything by it!
Besides my brain was lacking oxygen from laughing so hard, and I was covered in water
too as it spewed from my nose! Nothing quite like a nose enema!
Again, completely awesome! Thinking of Gokuu in the Green Party!
HA, thing is I can actually SEE him doing that!
How are you going to pull off the sex part for a comedy?
Seems to me it would be hard to do and keep it a comedy
or have people laughing up their lungs! I know I couldn't pull it off!
Well keep up the great work!
Thanks for to great update!
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seems to good that Vegeta would be freaked about worms! XD
and always just seems too funny that gokuu would be able to convice Vegeta to do anything!
lol!
No not WAY OOC, I tend to exaggerate! ~Pouts~ I'm good! I swearz!
And I am sorry, I really did mean anything by it!
Besides my brain was lacking oxygen from laughing so hard, and I was covered in water
too as it spewed from my nose! Nothing quite like a nose enema!
Again, completely awesome! Thinking of Gokuu in the Green Party!
HA, thing is I can actually SEE him doing that!
How are you going to pull off the sex part for a comedy?
Seems to me it would be hard to do and keep it a comedy
or have people laughing up their lungs! I know I couldn't pull it off!
Well keep up the great work!
Thanks for to great update!
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this two saiyans are way toooo cute! I just hope their little adventure will never come to an end XD
Goku's method of pushing Vegeta to SS3 is soooo dangerous but effective, hahahaha~ It's a little sad that
you won't write a sex scene for this one (but you did say that everything could happen later. Wink wink
;D), but please please give us more humerous romantics! Just can't wait to see them develop feelings for
each other! Seems to me Vegeta already has some toward Goku :D
Goku's method of pushing Vegeta to SS3 is soooo dangerous but effective, hahahaha~ It's a little sad that
you won't write a sex scene for this one (but you did say that everything could happen later. Wink wink
;D), but please please give us more humerous romantics! Just can't wait to see them develop feelings for
each other! Seems to me Vegeta already has some toward Goku :D
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January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh this is funny! i like it! please continue.