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by chayron

person TristaML
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So i began reading this story because i thought the summary was fresh and interesting, i didn't even check to see who the author is, and then i sit here open up the window box withthe plan of going to smoke right before i read it, but then i read the first few paragraphs and couldn't stop. i just kept going and going and going thinking to myself what the hell, who wrote this, this is not just some little story! this is intersting as fuck! but i was so familiar with the writing it was wrackign my brains ...

needless to say i get to the bottom, wanting another chapter lol, and was ESTATIC to see your name :D

I saw you review something or other ont too long ago and i just knew you were back and was waiting :D you're the very first author i ever read any yaoi on, and have always been one of my very favorites :D

It's wonderful to see you're back and i can't wait to read more

Very refreshing- best line "Alright! Go to hell! I'll do it!"

LOL

!TristaV!
person imherefortheporn
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHMYFREAKINGOD, CHAYRON IS BAAAAAAAAACK!!!! XD And the story is awesome! I actually lauched out loud *counts on fingers* eleven times! I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUU!!!!
person Tru6768
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yessss!!! I, for one, am ecstatic to have you back "home" in the DBZ fandom. I wish you a warm, warm welcome back :) I'm sure I speak for many when I say you have been missed.

Well, you already know that i like this story. You are always surprising us with something different and this time is no exception. I think your comedic debut is off to a great start.

Some of my favorite parts were when Goku assures Baba that no one can draw dead cats quite like her great-great-grandmother, and when Vegeta gets pissed that he has to go on the mission because his Woman just bought him Tomb Raider XV. I LOL every time I read it.

Nice work and again, welcome back!
person PurinsuArashi
schedule December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! This is funny as hell!
Way OOC, but I don't fucking care! HA!

"I bet nobody else can draw a dead cat like she can!"

XD

Please do not stop this fic, just to funny!

Thanks for sharing your humor with us!

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