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July 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i actually feel more sorry for broli, as he gets treated like puppet from his father was almost murdered as a baby from the demand of king vegeta's guards, but this is awesome but sad :(
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness amazing! I feel so terrible for Brolli, I think him and Turles had a great relationship going and it was like we were in the room XD. Wonderful job!
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December 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Brolli. He's such a sweetie here and Turles seems like a considerate lover. Turles rationale for going on his Tree adventure makes perfect sense now - how different the universe would be if he had succeeded and managed to free Brolli from Paragus' clutches. And the rationale for Brolli's going after Kakarott makes much more sense.
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December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwr.. a story about two of my favourite Saiyajin, and such a delicious one as well. You captured Turles' roguish charms and Buroli's sweet innocence and curiousity so well. This makes so much more sense than the canon story. Simply lovely. I hope that you will write more about this pairing. I've always been a fan of Buroli because he has a depth in character many others are lacking. And his soft, docile side offers so many beautiful opportunities... he fits well with Turles. *sighs and smiles* This makes me want to start roleplaying him again.