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HAHAHAAHAHAAHHAAH Awesome ending!!! lol lol, two days of fucking and planning, just to do it all over again - oh, to be as clueless as those housewives :D

LOVED IT, i dont think vegeta should be punished though... he should be rewarded :D :D

wOW! I am amazed. I didn't know I could like Goku and Gohan's lemon so much. These two are sweet together, touching to the deep soul. I love the way you describe Gohan's confession, sweet and sad at the same time. I like this couple now. Vegeta you are temperarily out of the favour because you are such a bastard. Glad he got to pay in the end. hehe.

Again, great coupling between gohan and goku, very touching.

Purely evil. I don't like incest between Gohan/Goten and Goku at all normally, but this was so fresh and interesting that I just had to read it. Still don't like the incest, but I have to admit this is one hell of a cleverly written story, and it does fit the characters, strangely enough. Kudos for pulling this off. That said, can you go back to writing Vegeta/Goku now? *chuckles* I would have enjoyed the sexscene a whole lot more with just the two of them...

oohhh!! please let there be a sequal!!!
please please please!!

lol!! this was awesome!! i loved the point of views u used.. perfectly mastered!!

hey i can dream about the sequal too, so no pressure..

I read again. I like your style very much it is very intense, and it is evil. I like how gohan describe Vegeta as a cheap substitute. Judging by the height it is probably true. Okay better stop before more pervert comments coming out. I like the emotion running throught the scene: Goku's caring and affection to his son, protectiveness, gohan's desperation fixation, all well described. You are the only one who can make me read and like incest.