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February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to read more. please update soon.
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January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting start.
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January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow me like
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great potential so far. The intro was good. It seems you're going with a rare pairing...which is great. There's not really any Brolli and Goku fics out there and it would be nice to see some. Yours seems promising so far, so don't give up.
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January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
VERY interesting start. I'm very fond of Buroli - curious as to how you're going to write him. Only problem, you're slipping between past and present tenses now and then, might want to keep an eye on that.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good job on this chapter but when are Brolly & Goku going to meet each other?