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for Seeing The Dark Of You

by Blysse

person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
tch. I had hoped that Roy wouldn't screw this up for himself, that that soft cupping of Ed's cheek in the last chapter meant he'd figured out that Ed was the best he'd ever have and something worth cherishing. Shame that didn't happen. Oh well, his loss. Maybe with Al Ed won't have to have sex that is quite so violent to enjoy it. :)
person sylverart
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! I love your mix of angst and hot sex :) Thanks once again for the Roy x Ed hotness! I also like how it's Elricest, but not really (but it is). Can't wait for their "talk" :s
person sylverart
schedule April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...I never read Elricest, but you got me. Damn that's hot ;) And Roy is emotionally unavailable so, once again, nice work! Please don't end it too soon.. :'(
And as much as I hate to admit it, I appreciate the no sex. As you said, it would have ruined the mood.
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! A double dose of some seriously hot RoyEd smut! Damn that was good! XD

I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for Al (as in give it up hon, nobody's coming between Roy and Ed!) or if I should tell him to just be patient (as in Ed will find a way to work you into this relationship somehow)! RoyEd is my OTP but there's nothing wrong with an occasional RoyEdAl fling every now and then! ;)
person sylverart
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*drool* so good!! I really enjoy your story - don't know how I missed it until now. So hot, everyone is in character, and SSSOOOO hot!! Can't wait to read more (no pressure! I know quality takes time). Thanks for sharing!
person Ninny
schedule March 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omigawdzz~! Whut did he say?!?!
I must know~! Give. Me. MOOOAAARRRR!!! Please? xD
person katara
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow
that was AMAZING!!!!
*suspenceful music*
what did al say?!?!?!
cant wait to fidn out :D
person Amethyst-eyed Koneko
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*headdesk* Oh no! Don't tell me Al is dreaming of being with Ed! No wonder he was so pissy Ed stayed out all night! XD jealous much? LOL Sorry Al, you're too late. Ed belongs to Roy now! *evil laughter at Al's expense!*
person Fouloldron
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You forgot that you gave Ed his limbs back at the beginning.
Interesting twist though, I wonder what Roy will do? XD
schedule March 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love pissyjealous/Al he's actually really adorable XD

I would have loved to see Ed's face when hearing Al at the end, I've got a feeling Al is having naughty dreams about our Eddy and the look of shock when hearing it would have been a wonderful kodak moment XP

I look forward to the next chapter and don't worry about it taking a while, I completely understand about work interfering in the good stuff :)

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