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October 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Eh, there's not that much to review. Maybe if you were a little more descriptive it would be a better story.
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December 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Good job. Realistic.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was very sweet and sexy. I like how instead of having Chichi having to take charge because of Goku's naivete, you had Goku overcome with primal urges and take the lead and actually know what he was doing! Very nicely written.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was really nicely written! Finally Goku isn't clueless! He's got an idea of what's going on! Great touch and good interaction between him and Chichi! A good read.