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Oh Duo... :( That was kind of a creepy story, but it was well written at the same time. That last chapter was what really got to me I think. Who is to say who is crazy and who is not..? Who's to say that those we call crazy and put away aren't actually the genius's that would be able to figure out time travel if we were to only give them a chance. Who says that the ones put in straight jackets aren't the ones that were given the rare gift of being able to see into the future? Now I've just gone and depressed myself. Trieze got what he deserved.... but poor Duo got the raw end of the stick. Why didn't Heero try and help him? That's my only annoyance really. Just stare at him. *shakes head*

Oh baby I loved it! I've saved this to my faves and I am coming back to read it EVERY DAY! And don't listen to Shii...they don't know what they're on about. It was beautiful! I love you so much my amethyst eyed angel - aka DuEdSaChi!

Well, the concept is interesting, but the story itself is almost impossible to get into because of grammar and plot holes. I think you would do best with a beta who could help you with that. Otherwise, I was interested in the idea of the story.