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Next chapter pleaz your killing me here I wanna know what happens next. Kakkarot prego does vegeta have the help him with his horny problem and do they go back to the king when it's time for kakkarot to give birth

Next chapter pleaz I love this its awesome

I missed the end of the story as my computer was broke :(

Thanks for a great read and I can't wait to read the sequel :)

Wonderful story and I love your writing style, I simply cannot wait to find out what happens next and I must say, the detail of the story is just enough to let us know what is going on, without overdoing it, I'd also love to read long chapters.

Oh an intelligent Nappa! Interesting. I like how he masks it and also how protective he is of Raditz. Did enjoy how he dealt with Dodoria too :)
Frieza is being awfully nice to them though, very creepy.

Ha,ha, I laughed at Raditz's hair changing colour. Is it as orange as Goku's gi?

Thanks for the explanation at the end about the gene pool and the effects of carrying male or female Saiyans, though it did make me worry whether Vegeta's cub will be ok despite him having the gene :(

Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.

That makes sense as to why he didn't wish back King Vegeta as I could see the Prince doing that. Glad Bardock was the one to go SSJ4, out of all of them I think he's the most deserving. Nappa and Raditz hey, well I suppose Raditz is limited to choice at this point, or he has a fetish for bald dumb brutes :)

Turles is his Mom! *falls over in shock* that would explain why he looks like both of them, but still, I never saw that coming.

Who's this Guardian you speak of and what does he want? Did he instruct the Icejins to get the pregnant Prince or is it all King Cold's idea? From Frieza's reaction to Raditz being pregnant too I wonder if King Cold has some idea of reviving his Saiyan army but one's brainwashed to be loyal to him.

Yes I am wondering why Toma was not on Frieza's radar and am eager to find out :)

Oh I love stories where some of the Saiyans are revived :) Nice choice but why not Brolli and King Vegeta too?

I'm as puzzled as Vegeta as to how all the Icegin are back and also how Cooler seems to be able to know things are going to happen before they do. Spooky and very intriguing.

Hmmm, who would reach SSJ4, it's between Bardock, Radditz, and Turles for me, mainly cause they are related to Kakarot (even though that's not proved with Turles, he looks so much like him he must be related!), so may have the genes.

So he did turn into Kakarot, oh goody :) Can he suppress Goku though and does Vegeta want him too?

Loved the hot sex and Kakarot harsh reaction to Gohan. Poor boy is traumatized :)

What no fifth chapter *sobs*. Update soon.

I can’t wait to read what happens next.