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January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter UPDATE SOON.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did you upload chapter one again as it suddenly grew in length! Now there's much more story :) Poor Vegeta having all those hospital bods around him treating him as a freak, just the thing he hates, being surrounded by earthlings.
Goku didn't seem very thrilled with the news, I thought he would love another full blooded Saiyan not to mention it's his own child. Glad his Saiyan side kicked in soon and he felt protective over Vegeta, but he seems to be going a bit far at the end. Has he turned into Kakarot?
Goku didn't seem very thrilled with the news, I thought he would love another full blooded Saiyan not to mention it's his own child. Glad his Saiyan side kicked in soon and he felt protective over Vegeta, but he seems to be going a bit far at the end. Has he turned into Kakarot?
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Extremely short!
Still, good start, hope there's more soon.
Still, good start, hope there's more soon.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So short? When is this supposed to take place? Is Bulma preggers too, that why she's off to the doc? great start. K