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I like how you have all 3 of the pairings in here. All the good stuff packed into one story :) I especially enjoy Trunks' and Goten's relationship. It seems very healthy and supportive. Goten seems really happy with his new role and I can see him being so. I like how Trunks is super protective of him, too. I loved the end of the first lemon, too. "That was . . ." "Awesome." :)

Gohan and Goku struggle with their new situation a lot more and for obvious reasons, since neither of them was in a relationship with Vegeta when they conceived. As mad as I was at Vegeta, I hope things work out for him and Goku.

Poor Gohan, though. I'm glad he has Piccolo to look out for him. I don't blame him for turning Trunks away. Piccolo just cares about what's best for Gohan. Anyway, I am dying to see what happens when Mirai comes back. If he's anywhere near as protective of Gohan as Trunks is of Goten, then him and Vegeta are in for quite a fight. But maybe he'll understand what Vegeta did. I can't really even guess what his reaction will be. But I'll stay tuned to find out :) I also wonder what kept him away so long.

Yes, what a lovely way to wake up, for Vegeta and us :)

I'm liking how Vegeta is not afraid to show affection to Goku in front of others. Sometimes he can be a little uptight, but it seems here he is rather proud that Goku is his mate.

Will Goten ever forgive him, he took it rather hard, but then again it is his brother. Thought Piccolo was a bit harsh on Trunks though after all it wasn't anything to do with him.

wow this is quite a story

sounds almost like Goten and Goku have gone all prime territorial on their nurseries lol. great chapter I cant wait for Miari to get back, but I cant imagine he will be overly pleased with Vegeta having fathered his mates child which will then biologically be his half brother, ahh the posible confrontation scene cant wait ^_^

Fantastic story, I love Vegeta Goku story lines and especially when the have a strong Goten Trunks side story. I love the concept of Vegeta just wishing everyones tails back just so his race can continue, its something I can see him doing ^_^. I hope to see a update again soon to see what Gohan is going to do.

Ah so that's who it was. How come he hasn't come back to see him, that must have really hurt Gohan, well both of them come to think of it, what with the bond and all. Perhaps it wasn't so strong due to the lack of tails. He's not going to be pleased if he comes back and finds out what Vegeta has done.

Goku's such a forgiving soul. I'd have stayed mad, mate or no mate! But I'm glad he wants to give it a go with Vegeta.

Nice bit of comfort sex there at the end :)

Seems like Goten and Trunks were together before the tail regrowth :)

Oh Vegeta was so seductive when he took Goku, even though Goku was in heat and didn't know it, but boy was Goku mad in the morning when he found out the implications! Kinda feel sorry for Goku being forced into motherhood like that, but loving the dominance of Vegeta :)

Gohan wasn't happy about Vegeta's deception but was just as eager as Goku when it came down to it. Heat is a powerful thing.

Who, what, when, how did anyone claim Gohan? Suspense is killing me!

thats just beyond evil. leaving us hanging by a thread like that!

looking forward to the reveal of the marker!

laters! ~_^
miko

I'd really like to see this continue. I like the idea of it. I haven't read many DBZ fics, so this is quite exciting for me. Keep up the good work.