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Whoo! Make Vegeta cry!

Whoa! This is brutal! You really know how to write something dark and disturbing. It's been a long, long time since I've watched Dragonball Z, but I think you've captured Vegeta's characterization perfectly. Your writing is very intense and vivid and I think you will make this into a fascinating character study piece. Awesome job!

I don't usually leave reviews, but I am really interested in reading the rest of this story. Please continue with it! :) It's very entertaining. I feel kinda bad saying that, considering the position poor Trunks is in, but.... uh... good luck, Trunks!

I started reading this because it was above my story on the page thingy and I must say, I am intrigued. Sladen seems like an interesting guy with a dark past. Please update SOON!!!