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Okay so I kept skipping over this thinking it to be some cliche crap about Roy seeing Ed and remembering how he fell in love with him years ago when he was a boy and had to save him and blah blah sex war blah, but I while that would be fun, I was pleasantly surprised that it was far from what I've read before. Also Scar and Al? Different yet sexy.(:

This story was excellent. I liked the pace, style, and storyline. The plot was familiar but inventive.

The grammar and characterisation were solid as well. I enjoyed it very much. Well done. ^_^

Love the blood and gore and I could so see Envy humming that as he massacred everyone. Really good chapter XD

O_O! Daaaaaamn! You write a mean Envy! :) This is how I always imagined Envy would be in battle - utterly ruthless and totally enjoying his savagery. wow... For this line, "Whatever the Colonel was doing now was by the new Fuhrer’s order", which colonel is Envy referring to and who's the new fuhrer? What's happened to Roy, Ed, Al, and Scar? Are they all OK? Will the couples be reunited? (Hope so!) Will Ed recover from having these mysterious powers within him awakened? Can't wait to find out what happens next! :) More fic soon please! :D

Rule? What rule? What's Envy talking about? Sounds pretty bad to break Envy's rule! :) That was Al who ran out to get Ed wasn't it? I'm glad he's out of Yoki's hands. Too bad Yoki got away. :( Can't wait to read more!! :D

love the story. what is the rule envy is talking about? i have speculations but i figured the author would now best.
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Well, at least Ed is back with Al and the others where he belongs. It worries me that he has that blank look in his eyes. That and the red runes on him remind me too much of PrideEd from Bluebird's Illusion. :( I hope he snaps out of it soon. Where's Roy when you need him! :) Hopefully now that the war seems to be coming to a conclusion, there will be time for Ed to recover and for him and Roy to reconnect! :) More fic soon please! :)

That was good :P

I love that Al got some loving before Ed did, it's about time too XD

I can't wait for the next part of this.

O_O whoa. You know, when this fic first started, I had no idea the focus would shift as quickly as it did from Ed and Roy to Al and Scar. :) ScarAl. wow. Scar was a bit brutal with the boy but apparently Al likes it like that! Kinky little bugger! XD Why do I get the feeling that Scar might not survive the coming battle and that's why he made it a point to be with Al now, a last moment together before the end, a physical expression 'I love you' and 'good-bye' without having to actually say it? *sigh* Damn, I'm dying to know what's going on with Ed! Where the hell's he been? Is he OK? What's he going to do? How are they going to stop him from doing whatever it is that Ed is supposed to be able to do? Ed won't die will he? How will Roy save Ed? And does that package that Envy had Roy deliver somewhere for him have anything to do with anything or was it just some red herring that I can't seem to forget about? XD These are burning questions that need answers! :D More fic soon please! :)

whoa. The red runes on Ed's skin make me think of PrideEd from Bluebird's Illusion. That is completely unrelated to this but it's the only instance I know of where Ed had tattoos (for lack of a better term)! :) I hope that when his powers fully activate that he annihilates the bastards torturing him right now first thing! :) I hope Roy's OK. I kinda missed him this chapter. Glad to see Al made it thru the fighting OK. Not sure what to think of him being with Scar right now but whatever makes him happy is OK I guess. :/ Hey, whatever happened to that box or package that Roy was supposed to take somewhere? Did he deliver it? What was in it? More fic soon please! :)