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wow. ScarxAl. I gotta admit, never seen that pairing before. :) I gotta let a friend of mine know about this as she has a fascination with this pairing! :D A furious smiling Envy is never a good thing. I almost feel sorry for these rebels! They're gonna get what's coming to them for kidnapping Ed tho. Payback's a bitch ya know! XD I didn't know Roy got shot up so badly. :( I hope he'll be OK. He's gotta be there to rescue Ed and save him from himself! :) More fic soon please! :D

"Envy was going to give him hell." Envy? feh. Forget him, I'M ready to give you hell!! *headdesks* I can't believe Roy left Ed! WTF Roy?! Why didn't he use a little fire alchemy to save them? tch. Ya know, come to think of it, I haven't seen Roy, or anybody else for that matter, use alchemy in this story. Does alchemy not exist in this fic? Is that why Roy ran? no way to instantly retaliate? *sigh* By the time Roy contacts Envy and gets help, Ed could be long gone to who knows where to suffer who knows what fate! so not good. :( More fic soon please!

Yeesh! What a horrible nightmare Al had! :[ You know what Ed reminds me of kinda? Chise from Saikano. Both were made into incredibly powerful weapons without their knowledge or consent and both have the power to destroy the world as we know it. It's been a good while since I saw Saikano but I do seem to remember it not ending well at all. I hope a better fate awaits Ed! (Why I'm picturing Roy comforting/calming Ed like Maria Ross did in Lab 5 I have no idea! :D) I shudder to think what Al might have to do to prevent his nightmare from becoming reality. ;_;

I've said before that I love this story right, because I do *heart*

The hints of Scar/Al are a wonderful tease XD

I eagerly anticipate the next chapter.

O_O! Holy crap! Ed is a weapon! That's crazy! :D What the hell did Hohenheim do to him? Oh man. wow. I really can't wait for the next chapter now!! :D Hey, does Scar work for Greed or something? I was kinda surprised that he showed up just in the nick of time to save Al's ass when they jumped on the train and then he helped restrain Ed when Greed captured them. And whoa! Hello! Is that a hint of ScarAl I see before me? If so, I gotta tell a friend of mine 'cause she's got a thing for ScarAl! :) Does that package that Envy gave Roy a while ago have anything to do with Ed being a weapon? Can it hurt him or help him in any way? wow. Mystery packages, exploding trains, the army on the move, and our heros on the run! Things are definitely getting exciting now!! Can't wait to read more!! :D

So happy to see another update!
Good job!
Can't wait to see another ^_^

Nice bit of tension there and a small part for Rose XD

Liking the update, looking forward to more.

Most happy to see an update this soon!
I squealed with joy ^_^
And the plot thickens!
More soon? ^_^

I smell some Scar/Al on the horizon XDDDD

I really like this story and I look forward to the next chapter <3

Wow! This is a most excellent story ^_^
I hope to see it continued as I would love to know how things turn out ^_^