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for Soldier Blues

by RotSeele

schedule March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That is such a tease!!!! Now I have so many questions and no answers :) More soon please XD
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*flails* Now just where does everybody think they're going?! Roy's headed off to do God knows what in Central (shame Ed didn't tag along!) and Ed and Al are traipsing off to who knows where to find out who knows what! jeez... A lot of mystery here and damned few answers! :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
schedule March 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep, that's a typical welcome home at the Rockbells! Poor Ed. He survives a war only to get mangled by Winry! :) I seriously thought that Scar was at least gonna take a pot shot at Al just to "encourage" him not to return. Why didn't Scar go with his people? Ah, just one more mystery to add to an ever growing list... More fic soon please! :)
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love that you've brought Scar into this XD

That ending had me in giggles, Pinako's right, it is normal lol
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well! Mysteries abound don't they! :) A civil war being fought without a cause. A conveniently placed massacre. A scouting party that just happened not to notice Roy and Ed rustling around in the underbrush. Envy giving Roy a mysterious small package. I'm dying to know why Envy gave Roy the package, what he's supposed to do with, and what's inside!! Curious that inspite of the animosity between Envy and Ed that Envy is going out of his way to ensure that Ed make it home to Risembool safely. hmmm... Why is that I wonder... ;) Can't wait to read more!! :)
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and you always leave me wanting more :)

Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooo Intrigue XD

I like Ed and Envy's interaction, you write them so well. I look forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Interesting! :) I wonder what Roy will find when he goes on this adventure to take Ed home! Roy embarking on this quest (for lack of a better term) makes me think of Ed and Al's journey to find the Philosopher's Stone. hmmm. Somehow I don't think Roy will like what he is bound to find out. :( The Truth if often an ugly dangerous thing and Greed did advise him to mind his own business. wow. Can't wait to read more! :)
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So you've brought the Sins into this have you? hmm. I'm guessing that they're not homunculi tho are they? You've definitely raised the uneasiness factor around here by having Envy around! He always scares and squicks the hell out of me! :[ Things are not looking good for Ed right now at all! poor guy. I wondered why Roy said that he was afraid of being killed for being in his superior's house. I see why now... More fic soon please! :)
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving the update XD

You left us on a cliffy and I know I'm guilty of doing the same thing but it's no fair when it's done to me lol

I hope you update soon.

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