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August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome story, you have a great story going here, I sure hope you update soon, it would be sad if you didn't.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"you will be banned a runaway" do you mean "you will be labeled a runaway.”
"was not very far from his new ‘mates’ side." do you mean "was not allowed very far from his new ‘mates’ side."
Good story.
"was not very far from his new ‘mates’ side." do you mean "was not allowed very far from his new ‘mates’ side."
Good story.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I cannot wait to read more! The characters are very relate-able and I'd like to find out what happens next.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad Kakarot will get a good word put in for Raditz so Jopher can get his wish.
Now he is presented to the King, what will Prince Vegeta think of him?
Now he is presented to the King, what will Prince Vegeta think of him?
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November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So Kakarot is now a Lord and is living the life of luxury, bet he can't believe his luck. He does seem very happy having mated Comar.
Interesting that the King wants to bring out the legendary. Will they discover it in Kakarot? I hope so :)
Who is this enemy, is it Freiza?
Interesting that the King wants to bring out the legendary. Will they discover it in Kakarot? I hope so :)
Who is this enemy, is it Freiza?
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay glad you updated
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonder who it is? I'm puzzled as to how Vegeta will claim him if he is now mated to another, and eager to find out how.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story a lot. I feel it's very interesting, and I really hope that Kakarotto doesn't have any babies the first time, because that will make it harder when he has to be claimed by the Vegeta. Then he can have all the babies he wants.
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August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YES! This story is back! Awesome job as usual. Just a few grammar things. Also I was confused when I was re reading this and was trying to visualize Kak's room. If the rooms are set up like a regular dormitory (a bunch of rooms all next to each other) wouldn't the only possible place the balcony on the side parallel to the side the entrance is on? Cuz if it where on the left side then wouldn't the central garden be going into the next room? lol sorry for the OCD-ness but I tend to notice that a lot. Please keep going!!!
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August 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome!