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Hope Goku did really find him and it was not a dream.

Gohan was such a jerk I'm glad Vegeta killed him. No doubt tho he can be wished back, but should he be? That was a horrible thing to do, so hurtful :(

Think Vegeta is falling for Goku. He seemed to only think of him as a f*ck-buddy before but now real feelings are breaking through. Hope Goku's feelings for him are still the same despite the tragedy :)

Im definitely looking forward to the next chapter of this story. The intensity of this last chapter was very good, i like the fact that you didnt turn Goku into a total mushball when it came to Vegeta killing Gohan, I'm glad that you didnt make him side with either one of them ^^

"I dropped to the floor, completely stricken with grief, my body became numb and my mind began to blackout. I stared at the back of my lover, my enemy, my friend, and was fueled with the burning desire to kill him, make love to him, and beat him, all at the same time." Absolutely beautiful description of his feelings, it drew me even more into the story. Showing that he had mixed emotions about the situation made it more realistic than fantasy.

Overall greatly pleased with how the story is coming along, i just wish u would update sooner. btw if you need a beta i am one, u can send your chapters to my email address.

This is all very intense. I do wonder if Gohan can be wished back, and if he can, what will his reaction be? I'm torn between wanting Vegeta to be dreaming or this to be real. If he is dreaming and actually returns to Goku that would be a very interesting reunion with completely different dynamics - in a way he is surrendering. At the same time, his being found by Goku opens up completely different possibilities - he's been caught and who knows if he will continue to resist and run.

So glad Vegeta finally realised he could allow himself to love Goku and it was moving when he said his goodbyes to Bulma's grave. What is Gohan's problem, he is so full of hate. It's like he can't handle what is happening in his own life so needs a scapegoat to take it out on. Hope the others don't turn on Goku like he did. I don't think they all will but maybe some. Goku will need Vegeta to be there for him so I hope his love is strong.

Loved your story <333 even if Gohan is a little OC , but that gave it an interesting turn. Please write the next chap! I can´t wait to see what happens <3

OMG..DIS CHAPTER WAH SOS FUCKIN OT NO..DAM BABY MI LOVE YA WRITING..BUH YA SHOULDA MEK DI BLOODCLOT GEH IM RASS KICKED..

Fuck Yeah! chapter 6 was awesome!! The perfect mix of drama and violence, and LOL @ Goku's jealousy. Can't wait for chapter 7 ^^

Dis chapter was so beautiful..ya imagery..jus beautiful

Please dear god tell me that there's going to be more to this story. PLEASE! This is the first Dragonball Z fic in a long time to not only capture my interest, but my love as well. I will be so very heartbroken if I cannot find out what happens next. ^^

Chapter 4 better not be the end of the story, but it is my favorite chapter along with chapter 3 of course..to sum it up..love the story, it's very cute