rate_review Reviews

Loved Goku's description of his love for Vegeta at the start.

Oh dear, will Gohan make trouble for them, Vegeta doesn't care but it will hurt Goku :(

Cracked me up as well when Vegeta called him Goku :)

Hot lemons :) Now that they've both given into their feelings they can't get enough of each other! Surprised Goku can still walk :)

I'm a bit upset that Vegeta doesn't count their relationship but at the end it seemed that might be because he had bonded with Bulma so was still missing her. He probably isn't ready for that type of bond again :( Hope Goku can persuade him gradually.

This started out so sad, Vegeta really loved her *sniffle*

Like the way you slowly brought them together, Goku so attracted but frightened to take it further, Vegeta amused by it. I think Vegeta may be going to up the ante now tho, I can almost see the glint in his eye. Hope Goku will be ok and Vegeta is not just playing with him.

I can't wait to see how this turns out. Loved Goku's dream. At least Goku was finally bold enough to make the first move, and lucky for him Vegeta hasn't said no. You should consider getting a beta - there are tense issues, but it doesn't 't keep the story so far from being very readable. Looking forward to the next chapter.

awww..dah so sad..buh mi like e still..write more fi mi..