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August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story please tell me your are doing the next chapter as I am hooked!!!!!!!
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July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is amazing just amazing plz write more
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I figure Jen's well worth a look see. I'm curious to find out how she fits into the DBZ world when I read the next 2 chapters. Your description is good, and she doesn't have too many unrealistic Mary Sue traits so far.
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March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I particularly like how you wrote the relationship between Vegeta and Bulma here. Nice details and insight into their life.
It will be neat to see how this 'new saiyan' integrates with the DBZ crew. I enjoy seeing how an OC often reactis to meeting others for the first time.
It will be neat to see how this 'new saiyan' integrates with the DBZ crew. I enjoy seeing how an OC often reactis to meeting others for the first time.