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Hey! What wrong with your stories? "class=SpellE>" and "style='mso-spacerun:yes'>" is written in all of your stories; in every chapter and practically every sentence. Why is that? Is there anyway that you can fix it? it was really bothering me when I was trying to read.

Hi, I love this story. I am rereading it for fun and I remembered that I wanted to tell you that in the first chapter you had a lot of editing directions left in the chapter. Like class=SpellE> and things of that nature.

Hey Loovved this fic!!! I think I really like a submissive Vegeta...

I read the preview for your next fic...and I thought of a title...how about "Vegeta Unbound"

What do you think?

Can't wait to read the new fic!

Lmao! I must say, you surprised me. And I suppose, I surprised myself. Normally, a fic of this nature, I wouldn't read, but this was funny and enjoyable! Kudos! Very good writing. I enjoyed the Nappa abuse as well. lol

Aww it's over, but I'm happy you will post more maybe as another story :)

Your new story sounds good, can't wait to read it.

Holy crow! That new story sounds goooood! I'm all excited about hearing a new story from you again. ^^ I just know it'll be awesome. So...Goku scratches when someone is praying to him? That's different. Sounds better than a headache. Ah, okay. I see what you mean now. Now, curiosity and excitement take place as I'm eager to know what the next chapter shall be. ^^

Oh, and...stupid question...what's hiatus? You said you've mentioned it before and...I feel stupid for not knowing what that is but...I feel like I'm learning everything on my own here and...I'm kinda a slow learner. >_> I wouldn't have complained since it's got smut and all, but...I'm curious.

Interesting, this other child born on the same day. At first I thought it was Broly, as he fits the power bit, but do you have somone else in mind?

I'm sad it will be put on hiatus but look forwars to the next smut-filled chapter you promise :)

Yay! Chocolates! *Devours deliciousness* That...ritual...*shivers* was interesting. You can probably tell that it was unexpected to me because, I thought the blood was for drinking...and not for drawing on Kakarot...excuse me, Lord Kakarot. ^^; I think I'm jealous too. Of course, who wouldn't be, he's a God now. Ooooo, I like how you have it where whenever they're talking about Kakarot, you capitalize Him or He...like he's a God or something...hmmm. ;) Anywho, I guess it would be foolishness to disobey him now. :( He might accidentally 'smight' someone. Or is it 'smite'...I don't know. It's funny that you intended to have this story be a oneshot, or whatever, at the beginning, but now you're this far! ^^ It's gotten' waaaaaay better! I'm glad you continued! Things are going to get better from here on out, no? With Vegeta being his 'companion' and all. Or should I say 'slave.' *Shivers again* Oh, and I hope your holiday is a good one! ^^

This is great story. It is rare to see a story with Kakarotto in his full glory. Too many make him a whiny softie baby. I love the relationship between him and Vegeta and how they are happy together. I think in the end the prince know that only a god like Kakarotto can fully possess him and have his full attention. I look forward to read more.

Sorry to hear that you are going to spend more time on other fandom, although there are still one DB story to look forward to, Yay. I really love your writing skill and would like to see more your version of DB. Maybe once you finished the business you would come back to write more G/V? I look forward to that. Sorry I only review now as my laptop was taken away by my husband I can only read via mobile and I cannot review with mobile.

Take care and have a great day.