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Oooo, that was soooo detailed. It was deliciousness! ^^ I can't wait for Kakarot's ritual! X) I can almost see it happening! Blood drinking, salt circles, and groveling!! Sorry I'm excited. ^^ Oooo, can't wait, can't wait! Oh, and I wonder what other ideas Vegeta will get when he reads more of...that book...*shudders* Anyways, Gohan is soooo adorable!! ^^ He's all small and happy! Sorry, I point out the obvious, but that's what I love about him! I hope you update soon! :)

Also, I am unsure about turning all the saiyan hotties into...females. :/ Do you mean literally? If so, that's cool. It's your story. ^^;

Vegeta came how many times whilst being face-fucked?! Though the way you wrote it I'm not surprised, that was hot :)

Slightly worried about turning them into girls as I hope you don't mean Vegeta too *worries*

Aww, Kakarot's essence saved Vegeta in the dream. Loved the pie bit by the way, dreams are like that, seemingly strange things in real life are completely logical in a dream.

Making Kakarot into a god, well he kinda is anyway in my eyes, afterall in the show he was stronger than anyone including the Kai's.

It's going to make Vegeta more gooey? I think it would anyone, so as he's mated to him, he must be almost a pile of goo, I would be :)

Ah, I see. Wow, Goku being a god. I can totally see that happening. Man, you even made up a ritual of how it's done. You're amazing. ^^ Aw, poor Vegeta had a bad dream. Good thing 'godly' Kakarot was there to make it all better. ;) So, with the dragonballs (sorry if I sound slow processing at what you mean), Goku plans to have males reproduce? Or jus' Vegeta? :) Orrrr, can they already do that? I'm lost! >.< Hm, maybe that's why this chapter was called, "plans," so that way, it'll have us guessing at what he's planning, right? :/ Well, sad but true, I must wait. Patience is never my virtue.

Aw, that's it? All that binding and...he only did that? :( Well, I guess there's not that much he can do, with all that rope around him. That is a lot of rope. Hm, it was exciting when Vegeta was panicking a little at the sight of the rope, though that's just my twisted humor. ^^ I'm assuming a karabiner is a clip of some sort? Sorry, I'm not too familiar with that term. Anyways, this chapter was satisfying. You promised a lot of rope and sure enough, rope, rope, and more rope. I thought the one for his tail was cute. ^^

Hot chapter! Vegeta completely helpless and at his mercy :)

Can't wait for more :)

love it

Damn Goku remeber to get a pre-nup, pre-nup you fool she don't get shit, nada, didly squat. (shakes head and mutter) Sayans bunch of brainless apes. Oi ho dar eyou make my Vegeta submit, *it was pretty hot.

*glares moodily from corner*

ok, great chapter, and gods, do i understand real life. but i missed out on last week's chappie, especially since the weekly Naruto update left me hanging and peeved. So, this week is a wonderful break. and plus, even though i currently have TWO 2y/o boys in my house, they're behaving remarkably well in the conditions set.

anywho....
yes, i am personally familiar with the cast iron skillet- i've seen a couple go flying through windows before, and i use them for my cooking, when appilicable. they're great for everything. ^^i'm glad Goku won custody ( i didn't doubt you at all) and your implications of rope will hold me in sway until you post it. so... how many weeks? four? damn.... I WILL BE WAITING AND LURKING!!!! No cookies until i get my bondage.