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September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Looks at comment* That would be very exciting to see. Hm, I get the feeling that Kakarot didn't only come to this planet just to acquire a few witnesses... :/ I guess I'll just have to wait and see. *glares at short chapter, though, knows why*
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August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Found you from YHH and thought, 'eh, why not?' and the conclusion is Not Bad at All. You don't need to be a DBZ fanatic to follow, and I appreciate having porn with my plot. For your 'Evil' series: Darn it's finished, but I can read it in one go. For this one: Darn, I have to wait 3 weeks for the legal fun. Overall: Good job. On my way back to YYH... (the one thing I can do with a broken foot is explore the realm of fanfiction, since I can't get to my job, my books and manga, my video games... sorry for the venting)
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh i love love love this story. i love how Vegeta is submissive and how Goku is a loving dominating Saiyan =] please please e-mail me when you update this story yaioyuri19@yahoo.com
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"Sometimes he looks at me as if I am a work of art, and he is the artist shaping me." I just love that sentence. It's poetic and...romantic in a way. ^^ I'm glad you made a chapter like this. Now we all know how Vegeta is taking this. I think he should disobey, just to see what happens. I mean, he has his pride still, doesn't he? Besides, what's the worst Kakarot can do? *ponders, but tries not to think about it that much* Anyways, always eager to see what happens next. ^^
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August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta's got it very bad. I like how Goku pushes him to excel and takes real pleasure in Vegeta's successes.
(You know, I check this site a couple times a day, every day, hoping for an update of yours. So today is a good day.)
(You know, I check this site a couple times a day, every day, hoping for an update of yours. So today is a good day.)
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Its not that I'm not interested in the rest of the story, I just feel a little sadistic at the moment, and want to see ChiChi tortured, thats all. Also because then she is finally out of the way and cant interupt them wehn Goku 'trains' Vegeta ^____^
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July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like that Goku recognizes that Vegeta can't totally accept this and has to fight back as who he thinks he's supposed to be.
There's a bondage picture on DA that I can completely see your Vegeta doing - http://neoromantika.deviantart.com/art/Bondage-114971092
If you don't have a DA account (you have to be logged in as an adult to see it) I can email it to you - pixelgoddess@likeacat.com. (It's a guy in rope and fetish heeled boots. :D )
There's a bondage picture on DA that I can completely see your Vegeta doing - http://neoromantika.deviantart.com/art/Bondage-114971092
If you don't have a DA account (you have to be logged in as an adult to see it) I can email it to you - pixelgoddess@likeacat.com. (It's a guy in rope and fetish heeled boots. :D )
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have gotten me really interested in this fic. Very very hot. I understand the strength it takes to submit willingly to another person. (I saw the comment earlier about how Vegeta was acting weak.) I would have had a slight problem with the abrupt change in Vegeta's character, but then you put in the fact that Vegeta gave Goku a black eye. That made all of my worries disappear. What I wouldn't give to be a fly on the wall when Goku is training Vegeta....yegads. I am happy to see I am not the only Sub who enjoys to partake in fanfiction. =p
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July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.o You like my mind? Yay. ^^ Ooooo. Vegeta's very obedient, it's cute. ^^ As for this whole troublesome thing with the ex-wife, I know Goku will win. He's got all the support and no one likes Chichi.
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July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wondeful chapter, i hope goku doesn't have any trouble from chi-chi when it comes to these divorce