rate_review Reviews

I really like this story, I cant wait to read more.
I like the lemons and am courisosly waiting to know what they will do with their room and all those toys.
But honestly at the moment I'm more interested to know what Goku will do about CHiChi.

I don't really like her, since she alsways hits him with her pan! And tricking him into marring her was really, really mean!
She shouldn't get any of his money, and when she tries she will loose her son, too. I love your Goku and his plotting, she is in for a surrprise, because as soon as he tells the lawyers that she hits him he will get his son (And I bet she will blow up when she notice how much smarter and slyer he is now)
You should really bash her in the ground, she will learn not to mess with Goku! ^_____^

But there is a little problem with your story: Now that Vegeta is with Goku, how will Trunks be born?
I mean, Vegeta seems not very interestest in Bulma, so what will they do about Trunks? Or will it be a one time thing, like you wrote in the journal, where they get together to make a child an then leave each other alone?

Well, I can't wait to read the next chapter, no matter what happens there. Please update soon ^___^

Ashray

"He shows me how to mount the carcass..." O.o After reading that far in the sentence, my mind went weird and soon I had crazy, horrid images in my head...but I read on and I felt better. :) Oh my goodness. After reading the rest of the chapter, I thought the room was getting hotter. I actually had to stop reading a bit so I wouldn't become like Vegeta. ^^; Damn you're a good writer. You make a delicious dom Kakarot and a yummy sub Vegeta. You probably hear that a lot, but it's friggin' true! I really can't wait for more!

LOVE IT

How long has it been since I told you I loved you? Could Vegeta ever have imagined that submission to the right person could be so orgasmic?

A very..Mouthwatering chapter...And it isn't the pig XD.
I love the fact that even though Goku is the 'master'
he isn't all abusive and what not. He is still tender
to Vegeta while not being so overbearing.

Love it! Cannot wait for the next update.

Gaaaaahhhh! You're such a tease. The list has such wonderfully kinky possibilities. :)

Woooweee Goku sure has a lot on his plate... and Vegeta sure is in for a lot of fun time ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^

I have to admit that at first I thought you were just trying to get off easy but, geez... the possibilities through this list.. *grins* *Is a pervert*(duh)

Is it wrong that I know what those things are without research? XD

O.o I can only fantasize what half of this list is for. 'Vibrating Cock Sleeve' *shivers* 'Collar' 'Leash' *grins*

Yay for kinky goodies X3, I wonder if Goku is going to take up that man's offer
of a threesome. And I am curious to know who is the man.
Interesting list indeed, XD