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for Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much

by sefiru

person Sigart
schedule May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* no sex?! Noooooooooooo.... XDDDD

Oh, I do love Goku being all calm and in control. (I also bet Mr. Lawyer was the man Chichi was sharing scent with., am I right?)
person Zofo
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the reading of the journal so hope there will be more of it. Can't wait to see Kakarot's full plan for Vegeta and what new rules he will come up with :) Also wondering what the lawyers have in store though this new Goku won't take it lying down.
schedule May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, well that explains it. Another delicious lemon and no disappointments, except that it was too short. Though, I guess I shouldn't complain because you update and that's all that really matters. ^^
person Zeenath
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I know how it feels to have a story take a life of it's own and decides where it's going without your input. All you can do is follow to learn whats happening. ^-^
YAY! ^-^ a small, bitty, tiny, bit of smut ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person Sigart
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, gotta love bizarre alien genes XD

Man, I waited all day yesterday for this, even knowing it wouldn't be there until I got up this morning.. and yes, I know short chapters are your style :p it was meant as a compliment.
schedule May 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, and addicting. I know you
said you wouldn't update alot but I do hope more chapters roll
in. The way you describe Goku have sexual prowress is actually
quite sexy. I kind of like it when he is the Seme and Vegeta
the Uke.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course, with all those tyrants dominating Vegeta's life, he's bound to be a sub. ^^ He sure is tasty. Yeah, I also have a hard time believing that you had a writer's block on Vegeta, but don't worry, it happen's to everyone.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you have expanded on this. You make submissive Vegeta so delicious. Now I'm wondering what he'll have to do to earn his collar.
person Zeenath
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice ^-^ now this is getting interesting. the reading of the journal is defenitly interseting. Can't wait to learn about the back ground and traditions that you've given to the saiyan coulture.
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person Sigart
schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Why, oh why, are you so good but write such short chapters? XD Not that I'm complaining about the update schedule, mind, but just... Want... more..!

...I like the Aged Mentor (how'd you make the 'tm' like that?) XD He's nice... and aged... and mentor-y.

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