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for Vegeta Doth Protest Too Much

by sefiru

schedule May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Goku is going to have his hands full. :D
schedule April 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's ok. Even if you don't know where you're going with this story, I'm sure it will be awesome just like the rest of your stories. ^^ Once again, another good lemon or lemon juice. I like that stuff, in this sense I mean. As always, can't wait for more. ^^
person kit-kit
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow me like
person Sigart
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^^ Well, I love how you write sub!Vegeta. And you're the only one on this wretched site who writes him that submissive... such a shame there are no more, but then, you can't have everything XD

Loved the passage where Vegeta was thinking that now Karkarott's gonna train him. Made me shiver... in a good way.
person Zeenath
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOUUUUUUU!!! kinky ^-^ and hmmmmmmmm what could be in that journal? Can't wait to find out ^-^
Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person anonanon
schedule April 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this story is much better than the title led me to believe. Story development through sex indeed....Outstanding job, please update once more when you have the chance.
person kit-kit
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha. Since Chichi already had control over their marriage, now it seems Goku has control of their divorce. Well that's good to hear, now that I know you're updating. ^^ I was worried.
person Zeenath
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well as long as you DO update at some point I'll be fine... DO update PLZ this is another REALLY interesting story ^-^
HAHAHAHA! Poor Chi-chi. If she'd just asked she could of had everything she wanted and now because of the stipulations in her divorce papers she's lost all acesse to Goku's money.
^-^ Keep up the good work ^-^
See ya ^-^
person Zofo
schedule March 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I read it before at Canon to Fanon, but it was great to read it again. Loved how Kakarot peeled the layers off around Vegeta's heart so he could start a new.

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