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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That story was pretty good. It seems the same if Goku went with Raditz or not. I simply adore the drawing! ^^ Sky upside down, I've seen many of their drawings. They're so good, I'm jealous!
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. . that was so cool! wow! Just WOW! I am glad that Frieza got what he deserved in the end. *glares and points at Frieza* The monster!
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March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is coming along great! Please update again soon!
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
Hugs & Kisses
Katonie
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March 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh. I see now. Well, I thought you're only supposed to say completed when you have all the chapters updated. :/ Hahaha, Kakarot's reaction to needles is priceless. Chapter 10 was very good. I likie a submissive Veggie. ^^
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! The reaction Vegeta had when he thought Goku was dead was priceless! Maybe some of Goku is rubbing off on Veggie-kun.
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you serious? That can't be the end of it. Where's the yaoi at? Unless you make a sequel or something that would be great. It was going pretty good so far. Stupid Bibi for ruining the most intimate moment of the story. If I were Vegeta I would've blasted that dumb, slimy thing. Seriously though, this should continue until Vegeta and Goku are together. That is what the story is intended to be, at least that's what you put. Though, you did put this up pretty fast. Did you not consider getting any reviews? Well, with a curious title such as this, you should be bound to get plently of reviews. Really though, it wasn't bad. You should continue this.