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for Devil's Gap

by Camui

person Anon
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very very cute, i loved this :))
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Where the hell was I when you first started writing this?! I loved it! And not just because 5x2 is my fav gundam pairing. You did a really nice job with everything here. Keeping the suspense up and the building of the relationship between the two. Very cute. Thanks for sharing. I'll be looking forward to seeing more of this pair from you in the future.

~Devious
person CeeCee
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I ran across this when it was complete! I don't read many Wufei/Duo stories but I've gradually started to like that pairing. You've made Wufei very likable, and the scene with the two boys fighting at the sink was priceless. I like your descriptions of landscapes and Duo's physical appearance. The conversations they had really did sound like stuff two grown men would say to each other who were starting to like and notice each other, without being fluffy. This was a good read.
person YojiKato
schedule November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Aw, Camui, I'm up for it if you are. I'm single at the moment. ^_~ Hehe. Loved the epilogue much. Very well written, sweet without too much mush, nice, lovely lemon, and Fei on bottom! Thanks for writing it!! Enjoyed completely. ^_^
schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! So sweet ^__^
person YojiKato
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
K, I've only read the first chapter, and will review again once I've read all that's posted. But I couldn't help but drop a quick note now. ^_^ I'm totally intrigued. The main ethnicities I have in me are Irish and Native American, but I know next to nothing about either *deserves blow to head*. Anyhoo, I love your writing style and am totally intrigued!!
person YojiKato
schedule May 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww... yeah, I loved it. Can't wait for the epilogue, either. I don't write supernatural well, myself... Okay, I'm in the middle of my own version of an original vampire story that involes all kinds of folklore and mystics, but that doesn't mean I write it well. Hehe. Anyhoo, I really enjoyed this. So now I'm off to see what other stories you've written. ^_^
person tsutahana
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! Not as cheesy as it could have been, very tasteful, and a bit true to real-life. Keep it comin', I'm hooked!
person enigma
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! the deal with the devil. That was awesome! can't wait for the epilogue!
person MorganMaroon
schedule March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Seme!Duo Uke!Wufei is one of my most favorite parings, thank you thank you!! ^__^ <3 I can't wait for the epilouge, will there be steamy men secks? *blush* Not I'm a total smut whore, or anything...
I'm glad that Duo got his life back, I was fully prepared to start crying my eyes out if he had to leave poor Wufei. Keep up the great writing!

~MM

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