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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ just fuck already!
Lol
Even though whenever I follow multi-chaptered stories like this I get mad when the sex happens too early :/ Like with this story it's gotta be drawn out, you know it's gotta take character development - like Heero looking for Duo and then fixing his hair and outfit and stuff (which was TOTALLY cute, like d'awwwwww!!!) and Duo maybe startng to realize that Heero's not being such an arse...
aiiiiiiiish I need to get to bed @_@;;
waiting ever so anxiously for your next update!
♥
Lol
Even though whenever I follow multi-chaptered stories like this I get mad when the sex happens too early :/ Like with this story it's gotta be drawn out, you know it's gotta take character development - like Heero looking for Duo and then fixing his hair and outfit and stuff (which was TOTALLY cute, like d'awwwwww!!!) and Duo maybe startng to realize that Heero's not being such an arse...
aiiiiiiiish I need to get to bed @_@;;
waiting ever so anxiously for your next update!
♥
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha good good. Oh Duo. Duo McDepressionPants. Ah well.
Oooooooh film developing~~
*is still patiently waiting for the hot sweaty man sex*
LOL just kidding.
(kinda)
Still as good as the first 2 chapters. :] Keep it up hon.
♥
Oooooooh film developing~~
*is still patiently waiting for the hot sweaty man sex*
LOL just kidding.
(kinda)
Still as good as the first 2 chapters. :] Keep it up hon.
♥
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I didn't know what to expect in the beginning of this, but it drew me in, hook, line, and sinker! I'm extremely interested in seeing where this goes. Great job and I'll be watching for more!
Neku ^_^,,
Neku ^_^,,
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start; wonderful word flow that keeps the reader hanging on until the next sentence, then the next, then the next, until... end. To be continued.
So, if you will, continue. :]
So, if you will, continue. :]
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March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haaa, guess I coulda looked for the 'Next Chapter' button eh?
Eheheheh ^^;;;;
*airhead*
Anyway. Sticking with what I said in the first chapter.
Wooooo.~
Eheheheh ^^;;;;
*airhead*
Anyway. Sticking with what I said in the first chapter.
Wooooo.~
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I really like it. Please update as soon as you can manage. I'll be looking forward to it. ^__^ It's really very well-written and well-plotted so far.
Ja!
Xander
Ja!
Xander