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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! :3 good story..
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot! Goku can't deny that he was so enjoying that.. heh..
I love your one shots!
~Vegeta x Goku forever!
I love your one shots!
~Vegeta x Goku forever!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaa why Vegeta didn't tell him why he start to do it XD but i like it i usually dont like rapes but this one was awesome XD
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It may not have been your best, but I thought it was well written, clear, easy to understand, and very exciting ^.^
<3
<3
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HI. HOW ARE YOU? I totally meant to review this days ago. ._. I suck big time; you have permission to slap me.
So here it is:
VegeGokuRape=♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!
The emotion was so raw and I loved how wrote Goku's reaction to the situation. As well as Vegeta's. X3 OOOO, HOW I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR VEGETAS!
MORE ONE-SHOTS! I NEED MORE! I NEED MORE LAURYN STORIES. ;_; I mish them. I used to read them before bed. I ... I ... I NEED MORE HAPPY DREAMS!
So, MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
...>>;
...>>;;
♥, Chii ^^
So here it is:
VegeGokuRape=♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!
The emotion was so raw and I loved how wrote Goku's reaction to the situation. As well as Vegeta's. X3 OOOO, HOW I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR VEGETAS!
MORE ONE-SHOTS! I NEED MORE! I NEED MORE LAURYN STORIES. ;_; I mish them. I used to read them before bed. I ... I ... I NEED MORE HAPPY DREAMS!
So, MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!
...>>;
...>>;;
♥, Chii ^^
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
a lovely emotional one shot
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very twisted one shot..the emotions of both goku and vegeta during the "rape" scene were very realistic