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for Vegeta The Schoolgirl

by sefiru

schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
....... holy mother of pearls. That was hott .......the best dbz fic ever. U still paying for my medical bills if i read anymore of ur stories lol u should do a vampire Knight or a crossover of dbz n Yu Yu hakusho
person Zofo
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That has to be the hottest cross-dressing story I have ever read! I was dubious at the start as I don't like Vegeta as a girl but you pulled it off wonderfully :)
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*insert fangirl scream* THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!! *blood dripping* okay....................i just had my fantasy played out by DBZ GUYS!!! *shivers* damn...................................................




okay, i have lost my mind...........


laters!

miko
person Katonie
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This was hilarious and hot all at once! It's another great fic! You've made my day with this one ^_^

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Katonie
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delicious as usual. Though, what's different about this, is that Vegeta actually finds Goku's bad table manners a turn on...that's interesting. They sound like they're made for each other. (I still can't see Vegeta doing a girl's voice. I wonder what that will even sound like? I'm not complaining...I just can't picture it. Oh, I hope I didn't say that already). Also, is this your last chapter? Cuz if it is, I think I can live with it ending like this...now that it's no longer a cliff hanger. :) But if not, I'm always eager to read more of this. ^^
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nnnnn. Guh. Vegeta + Cross dressing = KILLED THOUGHT PROCESS. I seriously want more of this. Could I beg for a follow up of this? /highhopes
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
dude I dont care if this is a joke.. this soo has potential! please make more!
person Anon
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sequel please!!!!! or at least another chapter. That was amazing and very funny
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Normally I would never EVER have touched a story with this title, not even with a ten-foot-pole. But it was written by you, so... umm.. I was kinda tempted.. and.. er... by accident.. ah, screw the excurses. This was a damn good read! I know it was meant as an April's Fool, and I'm not into cross-dressing AT ALL; but you managed to write this so convincing that I couldn't help but drool while I giggled manically. I love that you made Vegeta keep his normal sarcastic nature and especially his athletic build and seme tendencies. Usually with this kind of scenarios, Vegeta magically turns into a stupid weak has-to-be-rescued giggling, blushing zelda-excuse. But the picture of Vegeta in his school-girl-outfit giving Goku's ass the special treatment? Yowza!
schedule April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! please tell me you have another chapter ready!?!?!?! I LOVE THIS!! it was funny has hell! ROTFLMAO


anyways.......good laugh material.

laters! ~_^

miko

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