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l really enjoyed this and hope that someday there Is more of it. Off to go read everything else you have written, Thanks!

Wow you have done an amazing job and I agree that it is better to have a story with a plot then just mindless sex also I really really like Havoc to!
Keep up the good work and update soon! :)

I love rereading this fic I really enjoy the line about her chest sliding over his wet one and Jean's large hands, very smexy.

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I was going to say that it's not often you see Havoc/Winry, but I don't think I have ever seen it! So kudos to you. :P The whole operation seemed perfectly plausible, and the whole story flows well, I look forward to more. :)

That was very, very good.

Awesome update! This is worth the wait. I love how Winry tries to stay in control and fails. Your writing style is wonderful. Havoc's nightmare was interesting, too.

Yea an update!!! I'm so happy, I've been checking and rechecking. I laughed out loud with the first paragraph that was very funny. Don't feel the need to apoligise for taking things slow. I'm a huge fan of the build up and you're doing a great job! Very real and sexy and I'm really loving this pairing. The only think I'm having trouble with is invisioning how Jean looks with the auto mail spine. If you could throw in a discription (since he's shirtless :) of how his back looks it would help me get a better mental picture. It would also be nice to have it from Winry's point of view admiring her work on him like an artist. I'm sure it would help him to feel better about himself that she likes the way he looks with all that hardware. I'm loving this story and really having a great time with it, thank you so much for writting it!

I love rereading this story! I know that Winry is lying onto of the covers but it would be very smexy if she cuddled under them to sleep with Jean. I'm a big fan of smexy sleeping, all warm and cuddly.

I am loving this story! I would never thought Havoc and Winry as a pairing, but it seems to be working out very well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I keep rereading this over and over again. I adore this pairing. I'm on pins and needles waiting for what's going to happen with Winry in bed with Jean.