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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gasaa I adore this! You are really doing a great job with this pairing. I love that poonani is becoming Jean's new drug of choice, very in character of him. And the ribbing from Roy was very cute. Thank you for the preview, yum yum yum I can't wait untill she starts 'testing' his nerve endings and 'sensitivity' rating:P
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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing and I'm excited to see where you are going with this. I read a short story with Jean/Winry in this thoughts one of the reasons why he liked her so much was that he would never have to worry about losing his girlfriend to Roy.
The flow is good and I like the details like he noticed that her hand was on his thigh even though he couldn't feel it.
The flow is good and I like the details like he noticed that her hand was on his thigh even though he couldn't feel it.