rate_review Reviews

This story is great! pleez make ch.7! I love it!

Is it Kakarot with the three fetuses, oh I bet it is as he was Broly's favorite. Spealing of whom, I don't believe he's dead, don't think Vegeta does either.

Glad Vegeta has to accept all the boys as his for now and looking forward to any interactions with him and Kakarot :)

luv it...i can't wait for kaka and veggie to get together

This is a wonderful story. I understand that you are disappointed you don't have a beta. But please don't let that discourage you from writing this story! There are a couple minor errors here and there, but your talent for creating a narrative is far more compelling that I am easily able to ignore the little mistakes. So please continue! It would be a shame if you didn't finish it because I want to know how it ends!

I am glad you are writing again! I love this story and want to see how it developed. Poor kakarotto, he was not wanted by Vegeta, I wonder why. Poor him. sniff. I look forward to seeing the interaction between kakarotto and vegeta.

love from topbear

the long wait was worth it, im glad your back and up too snuff with your writing (mpreggooglyeyes)

HERE HERE! great work so far and can't wait to read more ^^ and i love your style of writing.

Glad you updated. This is one of my favorite DBZ stories.

I don't really think you NEED a beta. You write well enough on your own. I'm sure one would help you and (any of us) but I believe you do a good job on your own. If anyone says otherwise, they can either beta for you or just shut the hell up. >8)

Three fetuses. O_O The story is getting better as you write and I hope you keep writing it. I know how it feels when it starts feeling like a chore. Sometimes you just need a break from it. *nods* Anywhos, I look forward to your next update and have a good week where you're going. >;)

iam glad your back ^_^ i reallyreally enjoy reading your fanfic

oh no as soon as its starts to get juicy and oh so interesting TBC oh please please continue im hooked