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thankyou for updating ,ive been following this story since the first chaptor and im am soooooooooooo
happy your back writing your awesome story

I can't wait to see what happens. Will Broly impregnate poor Kakarrot?

Kakarot's plan to prepare themselves for him seems a little defeatist, but I guess given his power level he would act tlike that. Really hope they are rescued in time, though it appears hopeless at the moment :(

Can't wait to see what happens next tho dreading it too!

i cant wait for the next update

Intriguing so far. There's not many good dbz stories these days, it seems. Hope you continue it, it has potential. I like your version of Goku. He's pretty stable, empathetic, and he's no idiot...like some like to portray him to be. Hmmm...I didn't really see any grammatical errors and it wasn't hard to read your latest chapter. Even the best writers make errors and don't notice it. I've seen so in printed works. >XD Anywhos, good job and keep at it!

P.s. I would offer to beta, but I don't have enough time and well, I'm behind on my stories as it is. Until you do find one, just do your best.

P.s.s. Cliff hangers are evil! That's why I use em, too. Buhahahaha.

love it

That was some hot arena sex between Nappa and Raditz and I loved how you described the claiming, very nice.

Glad Kakarot has found some friends, even if they are weak like him. Grenpapa seems to have his wits about him which they are going to need to avoid Aspato 'spoiling' Kakarot.

What accident did Kakarot have and will he really be able to find his strength again? I hope so.

Thats a rather intersting story you have here, I hope you continue writing it. Your style is good, there aren't any significant problems with grammar or spelling so it's easy to read, allover a good job.

love it

AWESOME!!!!!

Pleeeeeeeease more!