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by nausicaasmith

person Vbprl
schedule March 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lactose intolerant, that's a new one, hehe.
person MysticDarkness13
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This was excellent. The story was well thought out and even the characters fit their canon personalities. I found myself reaching to the 'next chapter' link! The writing was really good too, descriptive without dragging on but gave the reader a nice mental view of the setting. I'd love to see more of this story if you were planning on it. =]
person Call wish
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That's it? It was so short and practically nothing happened. Redoux!
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I... I love this story! It's short and simple, and... it's very sweet. 1000/10 stars!
person Polymer
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very beautifully written story. I really liked your portrayal of Bulma and Goku's relationship.

Vegeta's 'idiosyncracies' such as him not liking snow and being lactose intolerant were a nice touch. Also the incorporation of christmas and other elements of culture into the story were very enjoyable too.

Thank you for a good read!

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