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Hey really loved it and enjoyed it a lot please write another chapter fast.
I want to read more.
i cant wait for other chapter

awsome.
cant wait for more.
update soon.

~Golden Kitsune~

Heya Mika here, this story is totally amazing and I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the amazing work and please update soon. XXMikaXX

aw that was fantastic, real emotion shining through so sweet X3

I wonder why people haven't been reviewing this is a really good, well written story! Although from the hits I bet people have been reading. We're just damn lazy. Okay so the first chapter was funny. I was actually surprised she decided to date enrique lol. Well I don't know what to say except that I LOVED it and you should continue writing even if you don't get many reviews because it would be a shame if you stopped. There aren't many good stories out there with Kai and Hil.

Also I like how you portrayed Kai. There's something so wild about him when he's with Hil sometimes, that impatient arrogant side that at some points in the story made me doubt if he actually cared for her. But glad to know he really does with the last chapter even if it had to manifest itself in that way.

You had a few misspellings and some instances where you might have meant to say 'her' instead of 'him/his' and some missing words in some sentences. Also is the actor guy that forcefully kissed hilary only a one chapter character or will we see him again sometime later in the story? Also they are in Kai's hotel room but he shares with the others have they not gotten back at all? or are they going to get there when Hil and Kai are in the shower? What about Hilary getting pregnant? You've mentioned nothing about protection. Anyways sorry for all the questions I'm just so happy I found something worthwhile to read.

Well update when you can please!!!

another great chapter the emotions are running high now keep it up

this was another really good chapter dont worry about review to much ur writting is very goos way better than mine which i still need to work on, i find that i get way fewer hits that reveiws o ohter sites as well as this one, why? coz most people ont bother writing them some just fav wthout ever leaving a comment >o< grrrr anyways keep up the good work

this was a great chapter, i like how kai is jelous anh i hope hillary comes to her senses and dumps her boyfreind for the sexy russian