rate_review Reviews

Oh things look dire with neither Dende or the dragonballs able to help :( I almost dread to read the next chapters as I know Vegeta will suffer, and Goku too, especially as feelings are developing. I'll cross my fingers for a happy ending.

Eh, gomen. It's a phrase coined by a friend of mine. Whenever someone does something that not everyone agrees with, he'll say in joking "Well, that works in MY strawberry-field!" or "It's my strawberry-world and I say it's true!" *laughs* It has become a sort of reflex to say it.
Interesting chapter... I was reminded of that one episode where Vegeta was buried under the collapsing gravitation-room.

Hmnn.. that declaration of love came a bit early and bit too much out of the blue for my taste, but I guess it is your story and your strawberry-field. Also, Vegeta was out cold and convulsing and like, two minutes later he was standing at the window? And wouldn't Goku at least call for Bulma's help when he found the prince in such a state? Ah well, mysteries over mysteries...

Who.. Gohan of all people? Nerdy, emotionally clueless Gohan noticed? That was a hard one to swallow. But I liked that Goku borrowed Vegeta's pants. That was hilarious!

Interesting start! Never seen this done before. Well, Frieza seemed a bit like deus ex machina (or rather the opposite, but you know what I mean). A curse, eh. Well, I'm hooked, let's see where this is going.

It's cute and funny, but I have the strange feeling the laughing is headed to a sudden stop.....Looking forward to more.