rate_review Reviews

Again, quite impressive! I'll be following all of your stories very soon here! You are a fantastic writer and this story is amazing! I wish I could elaborate, but your writing style is perfect and your story line is gripping. I feel so bad for poor confused Vegeta. There just aren't any stories out there that cover the days directly after Vegeta comes back to Earth after Namek, yet those are probably the most emotional for him. I will be recommending your fics for sure. Please continue!

I really like how you point out Bulma seeing the good in people. It is a very plausible reason why she'd invite Vegeta to live at Capsule other then just thinking he was cute. Also I like how Vegeta was blown away with this. You have a good level of description without going overboard. Also you have good themes in this fiction. Keep it up.