rate_review Reviews

Wow, this is beautiful. You seem to have nailed the concept of becoming a Super Saiya-jin on the head. At first I was thrown off by the cigarette, actually, but then again, I think Bulma is shown in the series smoking at some point? Anyway, even if she isn't, it still fits well. This is one of those fics that you can read more than once and it's still great.

I'm very glad I stumbled into the General section of DBZ fanfics. I can't wait to read through all your stories, because it looks like you're quite the awesome writer! :) Yay!

Awesome job. Very powerful (no pun intended). Maybe it's being redundant to point it out, because I'm sure it was the climax of the story, but this line:

“The power. I’d trade it away. I could gladly go the rest of my life without having known such power, if I also never had to know such sorrow.”

was very insightful. Poor Mirai. Such a tragic figure.