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July 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I love this story, very hot. Do you think you'll ever complete it?
I love this story, very hot. Do you think you'll ever complete it?
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy--! I was never that big of a fan of this pairing (I support them but I was never that big on them) and I never thought of them as a hot couple. But now, goddamn, I'm having a hard time NOT thinking of them as one now. Is altogether funny, light-hearted, sexy, hot, sensual, even sweet at times. I implore and urge you to continue this! Is too good NOT to complete!
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very hot!! Next chapter PLEASE!!!! ;D
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December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so great! My God I love it!
HNNG! More please!
Keep up the good work!
HNNG! More please!
Keep up the good work!
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November 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been coming back to AFF for the last few months pretty much solely to check whether this fic has been updated, what a great surprise when I saw that it had! Excellent chapter.
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was soooo sexy! I loved it! Truthfully Gohan and Videl wre never really a favorit couple of mine, but I've Loved your Goku and Chichi fics so I thought I'd check this one out and it was great! I'd never really thought of them as a hot couple before, mostly being a Vegeta/Bulma,Goku/Chichi fan but you've sort of opened my eyes to reading more of this pairing! Can't wait to read the next chap, I'm looking forward to it!
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I very much liked this. ;D
I would love to read more as well.
It's not very often I find something that I really like with this pairing, but this was so greatly done and the writing itself was also wonderful.
I would love to read more as well.
It's not very often I find something that I really like with this pairing, but this was so greatly done and the writing itself was also wonderful.
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Great! Please update soon. One of the best (if not the best) stories of intimacy between Gohan and Videl I've ever read.
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Such a breath of fresh air amongst the other lemons... Pleasant surprise to see that you updated!
Well written, you transmit Gohan's 'despair' well under her teases.
Looking forward to reading your next chapter.
Well written, you transmit Gohan's 'despair' well under her teases.
Looking forward to reading your next chapter.