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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...not sure if Videl would be able to ride Kintoun after a dream like that! lol...Good start to a story, I'm very intrigued for more! On to the next chapter!
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Gohan! That must be so painful! Geez Videl, help your husband already!
Very good imagery and choice of words...I really love it and you must keep going!
Very good imagery and choice of words...I really love it and you must keep going!
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You definitely have to continue this... there's simply not enough lemons with these two!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep it up (lol)!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep it up (lol)!